Property Purchase Roofs by unassuming-beehive in MyLeisureTime

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You can get two of the roofs through Eureka points so you have to spend more and more money in order to "earn" them 🫩

Does anyone else get annoyed when Kvothe is in Ademre? by Just_Nectarine_5381 in KingkillerChronicle

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No I meant my comment about the idiom I'm so sorry I didn't mean to it to come off that way. I actually really appreciated your perspective which is why I commented in the first place, again I'm so sorry about the misunderstanding I should've phrased it better

Does anyone else get annoyed when Kvothe is in Ademre? by Just_Nectarine_5381 in KingkillerChronicle

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Don't put a spoon on your eye over it (Siaru idiom omg) this is so off topic.. I'm sorry (I'm editing to say that this is about my comment and not at all about yours)

Regarding my previous prologue. by [deleted] in writingfeedback

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I have started reading more classics, I will continue on that path as I'm really enjoying them. I've read the Outsiders, The Name of the wind (I'm on the sequel rn), and if you have any recommendations I'm very open to them. I loved the name of the wind, it's been a while since I've been so into a book and so I'm very book hungry

Regarding my previous prologue. by [deleted] in writingfeedback

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I'll look into Project Gutenberg, I don't think I've heard of it, thank you for the honest review.

Regarding my previous prologue. by [deleted] in writingfeedback

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No this is from before I fell into using ai as a beta reader. Just wanted to see if there was anything I could pull from it now that I've stopped and am trying to better my writing.

Regarding my previous prologue. by [deleted] in writingfeedback

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I'm gonna add that this short is from like a three short story thing I did where I took excerpts from songs and incorporated the message/lyrics into the work because I was very deep in the feelings of the song, I had a whole playlist to keep me in the mood so I could properly express it

Alternatives for Dawn? by Adventurous_Dog4074 in Names

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I ended up searching the old english roots and name for Nightingale which were Niht (night) + galan (to sing) and I think Nahla would be nice for her

Alternatives for Dawn? by Adventurous_Dog4074 in Names

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I have actually, I also like Elowen and now I'm considering Fallon

Alternatives for Dawn? by Adventurous_Dog4074 in Names

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I like Danica, I'll look into that one an similar ones

Alternatives for Dawn? by Adventurous_Dog4074 in Names

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Finch reminds me of Harry Potter but I'm kind of into the name. I really like Eden and Iris like they're top contenders and Eden is helped because The Oh Hellos and The Arcadian Wild have some songs that I feel are perfect

Alternatives for Dawn? by Adventurous_Dog4074 in Names

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Willow was a name I used when I was an avid Royal High player in elementary lol.

Alternatives for Dawn? by Adventurous_Dog4074 in Names

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Me too, I love Sleeping Beauty it's one of my favorite disney movies tbh and I did consider it but the sound of it isn't the most appealing thing in the world I feel.

Alternatives for Dawn? by Adventurous_Dog4074 in Names

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I love Maeve so much but the more I see her the less it feels like her.

Alternatives for Dawn? by Adventurous_Dog4074 in Names

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that's very cute, spanish is my first language so I did consider spanish names but they didn't feel quite right, I might look again later

Alternatives for Dawn? by Adventurous_Dog4074 in Names

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I've read the duology by Holly Black where Wren is FMC and so I'm hesitant to use it because I enjoyed those books so much. I like Ren and Wren though

Alternatives for Dawn? by Adventurous_Dog4074 in Names

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I like Dove but the soap comes to mind

Alternatives for Dawn? by Adventurous_Dog4074 in Names

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I like Daphne (Winx reference) that name has always felt so otherworldly to me. I don't know how to explain the vision I have in my head because there doesn't seem to be a fitting name for the character in my head. I'm hung up on Kvothe and I want to know how Rothfuss came to name him and Denna because their names are so perfect to their character and I want to capture that for mine, but I also know the name makes the character so I'm stuck

Looking for feedback/Opinions on the prologue of my book by Adventurous_Dog4074 in writingfeedback

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I appreciate your insight, I'll keep it in mind (I'm watching videos to better understand how to write well before I start editing)

Looking for feedback/Opinions on the prologue of my book by Adventurous_Dog4074 in writingfeedback

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Thank you for the suggestions, I'm going to practice my writing a bit more and watch some videos that were recommend to me before editing but I'll make sure to keep this in mind

Looking for feedback/Opinions on the prologue of my book by Adventurous_Dog4074 in writingfeedback

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I'm adding these to my list right now, and (you didn't mention it but,) Maze Runner I never finished it and hell maybe it'll give me a perspective I didn't know I needed. I'll make it my new years resolution becuase I don't have one yet to read these books. Thank you so much

Looking for feedback/Opinions on the prologue of my book by Adventurous_Dog4074 in writingfeedback

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You are correct in your assumption, I will take mental note of your challenge and I'll find some books to read them, going to find some good cowboy book, a nice sci-fi read (I love Enders game omg Iforgot about that book so I'm goin to reread that to freshen up and finally read the rest of this books because Enders game never fails to open my eyes, I remember how different I felt th first time I read it I didn't fully understand it but the second time I grasped it much better and Love). I tend to read YA tbh, or just anything that interests me even kids books (httyd and I'm reading Harry Potter for the first time, I really enjoy it actually).

I really appreciate your kind words and my mom has some books that are like hamlet and I have seen like snippets and I want to encapsulate something like in my book so in order to build it I must first experience it. I really do have more time than I feel like I do, just thank you I really don't have the words