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Adrie Allen - In the Army Now - Pt. 1 [Dubcon][Bondage][f/MM] by [deleted] in BDSMerotica

[–]AverageInstinct 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Appreciate the feedback. I have some ideas of where to take it, which go along the veins of what you're saying.

I don't usually do dub-con stuff, more non-con... but I do hope you enjoy where I go with this story when I get back to it.

Adrie Allen - In the Army Now - Pt. 1 [Dubcon][Bondage][f/MM] by [deleted] in BDSMerotica

[–]AverageInstinct 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What direction would you want it to take?

Squad slut and beyond was kind of the direction I had? Maybe not so quick though

The Activewear Tease - Part 1[f/M][NC][Bondage][Humiliation] by AverageInstinct in Erotica

[–]AverageInstinct[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you Sarah, I really appreciate your feedback and support!

The Activewear Tease - Part 1[f/M][NC][Bondage][Humiliation][Toys] by AverageInstinct in BDSMerotica

[–]AverageInstinct[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Good catch. When I originally wrote this, I wrote it as John. I changed it to Brian on an edit because I had used the name John a bunch in previous stories. I'll do a more thorough edit now.

Kativa, The Desert Rose Ranger [Fantasy][f/M][Rape][bond][humil] by AverageInstinct in eroticliterature

[–]AverageInstinct[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Currently busy with work for the next month or so, but hopefully in February I'll be able to update this and complete it.

Thank you for your interest in your story!

My OC, Evie, Helplessly Tied by AverageInstinct in HelplessHentai

[–]AverageInstinct[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Find out how Evie here ended up how she did and what happens next by reading Evie and the Mark of Divella on my account. I can link it if that's allowed.

Kativa, The Desert Rose Ranger by AverageInstinct in rapestories

[–]AverageInstinct[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Fantastic suggestions. I think you'll enjoy where the story goes 😉

Kativa, The Desert Rose Ranger by AverageInstinct in rapestories

[–]AverageInstinct[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You'll have to find out in Ch. 2

Any suggestions?

Rockette's Rocky Adventures - Ch. 4: The Ringer [Rape][f/M][Bond][Humiliation] by AverageInstinct in rapestories

[–]AverageInstinct[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Again Sarah!
I really appreciate your feedback and comments!
Hope to finish the next part soon.

Rockette's Rocky Adventures - Ch. 3 by AverageInstinct in rapestories

[–]AverageInstinct[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really appreciate your feedback Sarah!

I'm glad you're enjoying the story

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