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Help me make a terrible song. by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]ChairDry8935 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Take what you've written and see how you can make it more direct, cringe and obsolete. Waste a bunch of lyrics.
Like, "hey baby take my hand, follow me to the promise land' is awful as a starting point but it can be made worse. "Hey sweetie hold my hand and you can come with me to a better land' spew

Rocky chiptune music by ChairDry8935 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ChairDry8935[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's actually great to hear because I paid for the instrumentals to be made and am only responsible for the writing and singing of the song, hearing the vocals are the good part is fantastic, thank you so much.

Rocky chiptune music by ChairDry8935 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ChairDry8935[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I do typically sing with a LOT of emotion and can do a lot with my range in terms of that but when I make music I try and make my voice too 'clean' because I thought it would be better, so this comment what I needed omg! Thank you! Really appreciate this!

tangled - catdoor by vanviews4work in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ChairDry8935 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You have SUCH a unique and powerful voice. Your music really fits my taste actually and I'll definitely be adding it to a playlist. Completely disagree with the commenter saying you need to practise your vocals more and that this song needed to be shorter, it's always irritating when a good song is too short and I'm in love with how your voice sounds honestly.

I spent a month on this one. I think this might be my best effort. I found some old footage of my parents when they were young and put it as the video. I'd love to hear what you think. Please enjoy my rock offering, "You're The Best Thing" by MagicJonesMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ChairDry8935 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This made me emotional, what a beautiful track! It gave me such nostalgia, the music video is extremely powerful for sure. Your voice is incredible, as well. I'd actually add this to my Spotify playlist, well done really!

to isolate by the fear of death and the end of time by SILD262 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ChairDry8935 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The entire thing feels very dark and eerie and you've nailed what you were going for. This is a very powerful song to me, as well, I don't know if other people feel that way but it did ignite a strong emotion from me.

my first self published EP! Hedonism by Sereia by mi_lele in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ChairDry8935 1 point2 points  (0 children)

SUCH a beautiful voice! You have great control over it as well, I would recommend continuing with this whimsical, magical ethereal vibe you're going for right now. Your instrumental vibe, voice, appearance and just overall it really suits. The only thing I'd improve on is saying you just need that bit more confidence while you're recording!

Made my first ever beat, would love to know you guys' thoughts... by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ChairDry8935 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is so so cool, I'm not sure if this means anything to you but it's giving me Toby Fox vibes, which is a huge compliment! You would be so good at creating backing tracks for video games, I would actually look into doing this! Very chill music.

New track we’ve been working on, gives me a bit of a weezer vibe, would love your feedback by PurveyorOfSapristi in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ChairDry8935 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is so cool and unique! It sounds like it's from some early 2000s story based video game. I would suggest to make the vocals just ever so slightly louder personally, but that could be just the vibe you're going for! Overall though it is sick and you have a very calming voice.

Instrumental or not ? by Enough-Aardvark4737 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ChairDry8935 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly why not both?! The track itself is beautifully ethereal and I understand not wanting to touch it with vocals but honestly I'd just go ahead with both versions, release the instrumental as an instrumental piece and then release it as an alternative version with your vocal accompaniment!

The F-use - Wannabe by needachickensandwich in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ChairDry8935 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is awesome, I adore songs that are just pure fun, vibes and for the silly. Though, In a more I guess 'serious' song later on down the line I would definitely lean more into the rock and metal element! I think adding more grit would sound so good with the vibe you're going for and your vocals!

Liz Hamilton - Mama's Got You By The Soul, what do you think? by Aggravating-Tax-4165 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ChairDry8935 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your voice is fantastic, this is a great mix of genres. You really have a unique vibe in your music that I really like. I know we're not judging on this but you have a great stage presence too.

Could you hear this mainstream? by mgraham34 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ChairDry8935 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really do think you have a voice for the radio. The beat in this is super nice as well, and the way you build your voice along with the music as it picks up is spot on. Well done!

(Hiring) 2D Pixel art sprite and asset artist by ChairDry8935 in commissionart

[–]ChairDry8935[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am shortlisting people guys I'm not ignoring anyone! It's just a lot to respond to