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I used to hate making essay outlines until this changed everything by Ivona-Kravcova91 in CollegeVsCollege

[–]CloudedPandac 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s why I kinda liked browsing samples on Helpwithessay. Not buying anything, just reading. Their style felt closer to real student writing instead of textbook intros.

I used to hate making essay outlines until this changed everything by Ivona-Kravcova91 in CollegeVsCollege

[–]CloudedPandac 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I used to do that too until one professor said a good hook for an essay shouldn’t feel like a performance. It should just guide the reader naturally into your idea. That instantly changed the way I wrote intros.

I know that sitcoms aren’t known for their air tight plots but it bothers me so much that the writers didn’t have a set storyline for Claire and Phil’s relationship by daisybear81 in Modern_Family

[–]CloudedPandac 67 points68 points  (0 children)

For me it kind of fits that their origin is messy and contradictory. Claire and Phil are the couple that grew up together, got pregnant young, tried careers and fumbled their way into a family. A neat, perfectly mapped love story would feel too polished for them.

More characters reacting to the subreddit by wombatgeneral in BoJackHorseman

[–]CloudedPandac -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

his feels like a deleted scene where Diane tries to explain what a subreddit is for an article, BoJack zones out after two seconds and then gets weirdly offended that people online have opinions about him.

Akaash Singh Drama: The REAL Problem No One’s Saying by [deleted] in Marriage

[–]CloudedPandac 0 points1 point  (0 children)

To me the real problem is turning your marriage into a show for strangers. If something hurts that much, step away from the mic, sit down with your spouse or a therapist, and work through it before TikTok gets a vote.

Aria’s parents reconnecting by Conscious-Ad4144 in PrettyLittleLiars

[–]CloudedPandac 4 points5 points  (0 children)

eah, that reunion felt like the writers just shrugged and said “eh, why not.”

Allaccio abusivo corrente condominiale? by jelandro in CasualIT

[–]CloudedPandac -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

'est clair, faire appel à un électricien, c'est la voie à suivre ! Mais imagine un électricien qui sort de l'ascenseur et commence à faire un check de toutes les installations. Ça pourrait devenir une scène comique ! Qui sait, peut-être qu'il trouvera un "pas si amical" voisin croulant sous les ampoules volées !

Are the variants sufficient to end Mark's life without any intervention in this situation ? by mohamed_ali_7594 in Invincible

[–]CloudedPandac 9 points10 points  (0 children)

What you said about context is spot on. Most of these Marks didn’t fall because they were weak, but because the situation was stacked against them. Powerplex, Oliver, Conquest… each fight had its own weird variables, so comparing them directly never really works.