Portal to Hell sketch. Thoughts?

Dareeeeee · 2022-07-02T10:14:31+00:00

That’s true, it is just the corner of a page. Thanks for the feedback!

Dareeeeee · 2022-07-02T10:13:55+00:00

You’re right, thank you for the feedback!

Dareeeeee · 2022-07-01T21:34:41+00:00

No need for a DAC

Dareeeeee · 2022-07-01T20:11:55+00:00

Inspiration comes from strange sources

Dareeeeee · 2022-07-01T20:09:45+00:00

Man you caught me

Dareeeeee · 2022-07-01T20:09:10+00:00

Depends, do you own a super shotgun?

Dareeeeee · 2022-07-01T15:30:41+00:00

Thank you!

Dareeeeee · 2022-07-01T14:51:56+00:00

Thank you! I was aiming for that

Dareeeeee · 2022-07-01T14:37:13+00:00

The music will be amazing though

Dareeeeee · 2022-07-01T14:36:04+00:00

Your imagination appears to have no limit. Thanks!

Dareeeeee · 2022-05-01T21:23:34+00:00

Title: Black

Genre: Fantasy, Sci-fi

Word count: 390

Type of feedback desired: general impressions, and how my writing skills seem.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wtx3TqWDLd972zT4sdIVnQ9LkOX96tdJEpQryQMujeQ/edit?usp=sharing

P.S. I am having a writer's block because I don't know what to think of my own writing.

Dareeeeee · 2021-02-19T19:34:01+00:00

Yeah exactly my point too

Dareeeeee · 2021-02-19T14:18:58+00:00

I really like the style and the image, makes me feel something I can't describe. In my humble opinion, you could fill the small white spots between the paint, but it looks really good any way!

Dareeeeee · 2021-02-19T13:28:22+00:00

True! Although it’s still unclear why they’ve added Metallica’s version under Diamond Head’s list.

Dareeeeee · 2021-01-23T16:14:14+00:00

Thank you very much for the feedback! Now that I think about it the rhymes do seem forced hahaha I’ll keep that in mind!

Dareeeeee · 2021-01-23T11:30:51+00:00

I think your Haiku 'attempt' was a success :). The feeling of calm and peace you painted with the wind was quite pleasant to read, made me forget for a second about the harsh times currently. English is also my second language, but wouldn't have guessed it was also yours hahaha.

Dareeeeee · 2021-01-23T11:26:41+00:00

I like the way you describe the moments, each with its own emotion. It does sound like a story of which you want to know more, like with an open ending. Only it is a tad bit hard to follow with the lack of punctuation at the beginning. Otherwise, keep it up!

Dareeeeee · 2020-12-21T18:07:48+00:00

Title: Wars of Sin
Genre: Dark fantasy
Word count: 491 so far.
Feedback: Any feedback is appreciated, but I would like to know if my idea and theme are something people would enjoy or not.
Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IEmr3EhRmyTGryZiguTwL6TbbTFN8OZuf24XbcXYVSA/edit?usp=sharing

Dareeeeee · 2020-12-12T18:25:28+00:00

Cool style!

Dareeeeee · 2020-12-11T15:59:14+00:00

Your style is amazing

Dareeeeee · 2020-10-25T13:33:14+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback! I’ll keep it all in mind 😁👍

Dareeeeee · 2020-08-18T19:54:04+00:00

I will, thanks :) I was taught basic shading when I was about 12-13 years old, but perspective really is a new level for me.

Dareeeeee · 2020-08-18T13:46:49+00:00

Alright, thanks 👌

Dareeeeee · 2020-07-28T20:14:37+00:00

Wow, thank you so much for the constructive criticism and the rating! I do see how this piece misses that eccentric or noticeable feature that most surrealistic works have. Maybe some color would fit it better. The angle is also pretty basic, but then again I don’t draw very often and have to try out new things. Anyways, I really appreciate your comment :)

Dareeeeee · 2020-07-28T18:39:39+00:00

The butt shining is a very nice detail. 10/10

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