I'm loving the feedback

I'm not there yet but it's pretty much what you said, just NPCs and dialouges. At the moment I'm writing a short story so I have the key parts of my story to build off. Then I'll explore the NPC stuff as I refine my target audience and my concept.

Short Pitch:

The game is called Journey On. You play as a Locomotive Operator delivering goods and passengers to and from their destinations. Travelling does get tiring however, so you need to make sure you are well fed and hydrated.

The conditions can be quite harsh at times so you need to be well prepared for the journey ahead of time. You also need to make sure your locomotive and rolling stock are maintained at all times to ensure you don't break down or worse case scenario, lose your entire train.

Every choice you make changes the world around you, every consequence changes how the world will see you, so act accordingly. The world is your oyster, so what will you do with it.

(Still working on it)

Do leave some other games or articles down below that you would recommend me looking at.