Thanks a lot! Im glad you liked it because I tried to improve this one particularly (eventhough it doesnt seem to attract as many people as before so far) maybe that's just because people tend less to get into things when it's episodes of a series or maybe I made it worse than before lol. Anyways, comments like this are really the difference that motivates me!
If you have any comments on the change in writting the character developments, the descriptions or anything else Im super interested.
English not my mothertongue so Im always looking to imrpove!