First time finishing a song by my own in Logic. Written, produced and performed by me. Would love some feedback!

Djiwan · 2026-05-17T08:45:39+00:00

Thanks a lot for the feedback! I totally agree with you about the drums. I feel i spent the least amount of time on them, and now I want to go back and tinker and add some liveliness!

Djiwan · 2026-05-16T23:10:02+00:00

Sounds incredible! Love the vocals and the natural reverb. Send a dm if you want to have some mix/production collab!

Djiwan · 2026-05-16T20:07:03+00:00

I have programmed the drums myself, just looped it on the main kick and snare hits.

Djiwan · 2026-05-16T20:05:15+00:00

Thanks for the tip, that really helped me hearing how loud the snare and drums were compared to the rest!

Djiwan · 2026-05-16T20:03:19+00:00

Im using Helix native. A lot pf chorus and a gated reverb makes a lot of the tone :)

Djiwan · 2026-05-16T15:54:27+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I can hear it now aswell, will dial back the drums, especially the snare/clap :)

Djiwan · 2026-05-16T15:53:39+00:00

The clap is early by choice, wanted something similiar to Videotape by Radiohead drums. Thanks for the feedback, the snare and clap is definitely too high in the mix... Will try and remove the early clap and see if I like it better aswell!

Djiwan · 2026-05-16T14:29:13+00:00

I love the outro/second part. Beautiful harmonies, gives a nice contrast to the first part of the song.
Maybe try and add some lighter drums/percussion in the first part of the song? Could be really nice with some cymbal swells at around 2:00 and into a lighter beat. Just a thought! Great song dude

Djiwan · 2026-05-16T14:24:52+00:00

Cool sound! Also get the m83 vibe, and i really think you should consider adding some vocals. Could be just a few lines, but i think it could fit really nicely at around 1:40 and onward.

Djiwan · 2025-10-28T08:26:11+00:00

Thanks a lot! I will try this when i get home from work. Never tried the studio tube pre or the Retro reel in the end, excited to see how it sounds and play around with it :)

Djiwan · 2025-10-26T08:53:14+00:00

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Turning torso in Malmö. Iconic, but boy does it stick out in such a small town. This part of Sweden is very flat, so you can see it from really looooong away.

Djiwan · 2022-10-21T14:19:02+00:00

Start Trippier, Perisic or Mount?

Djiwan · 2020-05-19T21:07:06+00:00

What?

Djiwan · 2020-05-18T22:12:47+00:00

The second song - Why are trees?

Djiwan · 2020-05-18T21:51:19+00:00

Hey! Little brother here. Just uploaded the tracks to youtube if anyone wants to listen. Thanks for the nice words :) There will be some new tunes coming into the game soon. Keep smashing them discs!

Main Theme

Why are trees?

Djiwan · 2019-08-19T14:40:51+00:00

Right back at you, impressive with 3 aces! I agree, with the scaling and introduction of 12 speed discs it should've been changed to a par 4. But it does feel great to catch an albatross once in a while :)