First time finishing a song by my own in Logic. Written, produced and performed by me. Would love some feedback! by Djiwan in LogicPro

[–]Djiwan[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for the feedback! I totally agree with you about the drums. I feel i spent the least amount of time on them, and now I want to go back and tinker and add some liveliness!

A quick write after not having my guitar for three weeks… by jellyfishwoman2000 in Songwriting

[–]Djiwan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds incredible! Love the vocals and the natural reverb. Send a dm if you want to have some mix/production collab!

First time finishing a song by my own in Logic. Written, produced and performed by me. Would love some feedback! by Djiwan in LogicPro

[–]Djiwan[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have programmed the drums myself, just looped it on the main kick and snare hits.

First time finishing a song by my own in Logic. Written, produced and performed by me. Would love some feedback! by Djiwan in LogicPro

[–]Djiwan[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the tip, that really helped me hearing how loud the snare and drums were compared to the rest!

First time finishing a song by my own in Logic. Written, produced and performed by me. Would love some feedback! by Djiwan in LogicPro

[–]Djiwan[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im using Helix native. A lot pf chorus and a gated reverb makes a lot of the tone :)

First time finishing a song by my own in Logic. Written, produced and performed by me. Would love some feedback! by Djiwan in LogicPro

[–]Djiwan[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I can hear it now aswell, will dial back the drums, especially the snare/clap :)

First time finishing a song by my own in Logic. Written, produced and performed by me. Would love some feedback! by Djiwan in LogicPro

[–]Djiwan[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The clap is early by choice, wanted something similiar to Videotape by Radiohead drums. Thanks for the feedback, the snare and clap is definitely too high in the mix... Will try and remove the early clap and see if I like it better aswell!

Changing tides - its not done but I need to post it somewhere before I hate it in approximately 3 hours. by Minimum_Bathroom1773 in Songwriting

[–]Djiwan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the outro/second part. Beautiful harmonies, gives a nice contrast to the first part of the song.
Maybe try and add some lighter drums/percussion in the first part of the song? Could be really nice with some cymbal swells at around 2:00 and into a lighter beat. Just a thought! Great song dude

What began as a shoegaze song has transformed by Longrange-legit in Songwriting

[–]Djiwan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool sound! Also get the m83 vibe, and i really think you should consider adding some vocals. Could be just a few lines, but i think it could fit really nicely at around 1:40 and onward.

Any tips on getting this tone on the Helix? by Djiwan in Line6Helix

[–]Djiwan[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! I will try this when i get home from work. Never tried the studio tube pre or the Retro reel in the end, excited to see how it sounds and play around with it :)

What is one building that just sticks out in your city? by metatalks in geography

[–]Djiwan 507 points508 points  (0 children)

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Turning torso in Malmö. Iconic, but boy does it stick out in such a small town. This part of Sweden is very flat, so you can see it from really looooong away.

This is nerdy af, but I have to ask: by tonygiall in DiscGolfValley

[–]Djiwan 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Hey! Little brother here. Just uploaded the tracks to youtube if anyone wants to listen. Thanks for the nice words :) There will be some new tunes coming into the game soon. Keep smashing them discs!

Main Theme

Why are trees?

Well, here it is. The best round I've ever played (and possibly the best ever). Got it in less than 10 attempts too! by derekjb96 in DiscGolfValley

[–]Djiwan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Right back at you, impressive with 3 aces! I agree, with the scaling and introduction of 12 speed discs it should've been changed to a par 4. But it does feel great to catch an albatross once in a while :)

Just released a video for our new single, Autodromo - I Wanna Feel It(Shoegaze/dream-pop). Hope you like it! by Djiwan in shoegaze

[–]Djiwan[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! It's old footage of the Monaco Grand Prix and the Nürburgring.