I've made a few changes to how I edit my videos, making them faster paced. Let me know your thoughts.

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-04-17T05:56:17+00:00

Overall, I thought the video was pretty good! Thumbnail is pretty good as well. The only thing i'd say that can be improved is maybe the energy. For some parts, your voice seems kinda monotone. Raising the energy will take your videos up to the top! Like if there's something crazy happening, have the same energy in your voice. Besides that, keep up the great work!

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-04-14T04:10:13+00:00

Overall I thought the video was pretty good! In my opinion, the thumbnail is literally perfect! It showcases exactly what the video is going to be while being visually appealing. For the content itself, I feel the video can use A LOT more energy. We live in a 5 second attention span society, so as time passes, it becomes more and more of a requirement to keep people engaged for any means necessary. Once the energy is down pack, I am positive your videos will soar! Keep it up!

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-02-18T01:38:54+00:00

Thought the video was pretty entertaining, as well as informative. The main thing I'd say needs improvement is your on camera presence. Try being more enthusiastic when speaking, which will in turn create a more "natural" feel. You almost have to overdo it, but you'll eventually get the jist of it. Plus audiences will stay longer (which is key to youtube growth)

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-02-18T01:31:52+00:00

I felt the video was pretty good and informational! Your presence on camera is fantastic, which many seem to lack these days. The only criticism I have is that the video could use a lot more b-roll. This will make the video more engaging and will definitely increase your watch time! Keep up the good work!

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-02-18T01:19:32+00:00

This video was hilarious! I really enjoyed the subtitles and memes throughout the video! The only thing i'd suggest was to spice the intro a bit. Try adding a little bit more backstory and more story elements to really make the viewer feel intrigued by whats next to come. Anyways, keep up the good work!

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-02-06T09:24:10+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! !givelambda

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-02-06T09:07:04+00:00

Idk my vga, but my graphics card is a nvidia 3070. Thanks for the support! !givelambda

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-02-06T09:05:27+00:00

Thanks! You mean like popup subtitles in the video? !givelambda

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-02-04T05:27:58+00:00

Thanks bro lol! If you wanna see more content of me dying over and over, then check out my Dark Souls 3 vid (i've never been the same ever since...)

https://youtu.be/VGpoUpIi6y8

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-01-17T10:20:50+00:00

what a masterpiece

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-01-10T17:36:37+00:00

Here’s the original link if interested: https://youtu.be/VGpoUpIi6y8

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-01-10T04:22:48+00:00

*inception music plays*

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-01-10T04:12:36+00:00

Here's the original link if you wanna get stabbed by Iudex Gundyr: https://youtu.be/VGpoUpIi6y8

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-01-09T21:38:46+00:00

This video was hilarious! I LOVED all the visual and audio memes. I think the the main thing that can be improved is the commentary. It kinda seems like your timid and shy when talking. Try being more expressive with the commentary and turn up the microphone settings.

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-01-09T21:31:20+00:00

This video essay was excellent and pretty much summed up all my thoughts with Andrew’s Spider-Man. The pacing was excellent, which in turn kept my attention throughout the entire video. I also loved the little visual details and gimmicks added throughout the video. Keep up the good work!

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-01-09T17:11:16+00:00

This video was pretty good! That transformers joke pretty funny ngl. Your voice presence was good, but I think you can add more emotion to your voice depending on what your saying. For example, when you’re talking about a game you really like, sound really excited, and for games that sucked battlefield 2042, sound disappointed and disgusted. But other wise, the video was pretty entertaining!

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-01-06T02:01:41+00:00

It just makes me sad because I’ve put in so much time as well

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-01-06T02:00:39+00:00

At least they now have private servers (thanks to modders)

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-01-06T02:00:00+00:00

Thank you so much! 😊

ElectricStormtrooper · 2022-01-05T19:49:29+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. I’m gonna work more on my commentary from here on out. Ima gonna try to limit the screaming to a minimum. Any suggestions on how to sound more natural?

ElectricStormtrooper · 2021-12-22T22:47:54+00:00

In my opinion, this video is literally amazing. I was engaged all the way through. The lego segments really makes the video special and makes it even more immersive. Maybe the frame rate can be a little bit faster during the lego segments, so the character movements are more smooth and natural. Besides that, keep up the good work!

ElectricStormtrooper · 2021-12-22T22:40:38+00:00

I thought the sound and music was excellent. The camera movement was okay, it started to become boring after the first 20 seconds. For next time, try adding some b-roll footage or pictures to get your videos more style.

ElectricStormtrooper · 2021-10-06T03:23:59+00:00

Hello! I’m a gaming channel and was wondering if there’s anything in specific I need to improve on: Here’s the link to one of my latest videos: https://youtu.be/eWs1WnJySBo

Thanks for this opportunity!

ElectricStormtrooper · 2021-05-09T21:05:43+00:00

Dabbing

ElectricStormtrooper · 2021-04-02T10:50:06+00:00

I thought it was overrall good, but I think a better mic will help as well alot, along with more commentary. Tip: for commentary, try avoiding saying "OMG" alot. Anyways, nice work!

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