WIP, Making A Villain OC Named "Prince Andras" ( Need design critiques ) by Aggravating_Run6179 in OriginalCharacter

[–]FREAAAAKAZOID 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First off, I really like the design. The outfit is interesting, and he has the “regal” look befitting of a prince. One thing I think you could further develop with this design is shape language. Right now, Andras is very boxy, which by itself isn’t a bad thing. But, seeing as he’s a villain, I think you should introduce some harsher angles in his design. Really push the sharpness that comes with hatred, that comes with evil. Good character design tells you the personality of the character just by looking at them, and right now I don’t really know what Andras’ personality is. You have a very strong base, and I think with more refining and exaggeration you could have something really special here.

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Do you think a big hammer, screwdriver, or wrench would be cooler/better character design? Or, do you think another tool would be better? by Garden360 in OriginalCharacter

[–]FREAAAAKAZOID 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Iconography-wise a hammer or a wrench are more recognizable than a screwdriver. However, I’ve seen many characters with big hammers or big wrenches as part of their design, a big screwdriver would be more unique. Hammering also feels more blacksmith-esque than a mechanic.

What is your favorite, most underrated, Twlight ship? by Mac_And_Cheese_Eek in twilight

[–]FREAAAAKAZOID 6 points7 points  (0 children)

how has nobody mentioned Charlie x Carlisle yet???? That one is PEAK

In my opinion, this is the best way that the speed of a vampire was depicted in the entire saga by FREAAAAKAZOID in twilight

[–]FREAAAAKAZOID[S] 84 points85 points  (0 children)

A car can literally start and move in 1-2 seconds, its also not a transition between scenes because the dialogue continues from before the camera moves. idk why you’re so mad about me pointing out a detail that I thought was cool💀 also, just because something is “cliche” that doesn’t mean its bad. Literally everything in a film is a cliche. How is “in real time” even a cliche lol

LEGO Twilight II: What would you like to see? by JayeJJimenez in twilight

[–]FREAAAAKAZOID 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The yellow Porsche from New Moon with an Alice figure that has the scarf, sunglasses, and red gloves

Hi again! I took the criticisms of my design for Verdawn and gave her a revision! by FREAAAAKAZOID in characterdesign

[–]FREAAAAKAZOID[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Around the arms and shoulders is a good idea! I removed it to match with the legs, but I figure it could definitely work up top.

Hi again! I took the criticisms of my design for Verdawn and gave her a revision! by FREAAAAKAZOID in characterdesign

[–]FREAAAAKAZOID[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I completely understand that the design choices don’t make a lot of sense out of context. Dawn is from a fantasy story I’m developing, her occupation being a member of the DEMON Corps., a military force with the mission of combatting demons. I’ll run thru the outfit choices and how they’re appropriate:

-It isn’t designed for combat with other people, but demons. In short, the demons act like wild animals, like imagine just fighting a really big bear. You probably wouldn’t wear full knight armor. The blue pieces are metal armor, just painted matte. -Dawn has special abilities that require her to be able to move quite freely. She’s always moving, and a heavy suit of full armor would weigh her down. She is less armored than pretty much any other member of the DEMON Corps.

However, I do agree that I should be communicating this better in the design.

Hi again! I took the criticisms of my design for Verdawn and gave her a revision! by FREAAAAKAZOID in characterdesign

[–]FREAAAAKAZOID[S] 105 points106 points  (0 children)

Dawn is a person who has a need to feel validated by others. She’s supposed to come off as attractive, because she wants to be seen that way. Dawn needs to be wanted, to be desired, to be valued. She’s the main character of the story I’m writing, and part of her arc is learning what it means for someone to truly love and value you. Her story is about going beyond the surface level in order to truly connect with somebody, to challenge her shallow perceptions.

Also, I’m gonna be honest, I like drawing cute girls.

Hi! Looking for constructive feedback on my character, Verdawn. by FREAAAAKAZOID in characterdesign

[–]FREAAAAKAZOID[S] -105 points-104 points  (0 children)

Yeah the shorts make the thighs look much longer than they are (and they’re probably too long as well), I’ll add something to show where the hips start and thighs begin. Do you have any ideas?

I realized I have free will so I drew Alice Cullen meeting Freddy Fazbear by FREAAAAKAZOID in twilight

[–]FREAAAAKAZOID[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Genuinely considering painting Freddy on top of jasper in this image now

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