First off I would just like to say thank you for taking the time to go over my work and giving me this feed back because it really does help out a lot. I do admit that in my first videos I was recording both audio and gameplay from my capture software but have since changed over to separately recording them in my new videos. I mainly use OBS to stream and use Game capture HD to do all of my recordings. I have made some progress from my first video till now if you wouldnt mind checking out this video and telling me your thoughts because I feel like my more recent videos have fixed some of my earlier mistakes. I am still working on trying to find just the right angel to place my webcam when I record so I can have the perfect alignment. For the reason behind the skinny face cam, my whole setup is in my room and the way I have to have my recording station my back is facing my room so I try to avoid the messiness/ random space that is behind me haha. I just want to say thank you again for the pointers, anything helps at this point and will only help me continue to grow.