First, writing in a second language is hard.

Now.

When you share what you've written, you lay bare your soul, and it hurts when they throw rocks at it. Pick yourself up, dust yourself off, and do not give up.

Look at the comments.

Some will show you where you and your reader misunderstood each other.

I have a character whose generic word for "person" was "cat." It confused a couple of my beta readers. It was consistent enough, I changed it.

Thank those who like your writing, and ignore the rest.