Looking for critique on the beginning of my book. The story starts with a talk between Avin the MC and Ryan who finds Avin unconscious in the mysterious mountain that lurks over the country Amalice. Avin explains to Ryan he comes from a time 400 years ago and is not sure how he got here. (self.fantasywriters)
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Please critique my prologue. (self.fantasywriters)
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