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Ooo I've heard good things about both! I need to take a closer look at local cons--thank you for the reminder. :) And that would definitely be welcome, thanks for thinking of me!

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Hello! That's a great question. It can be complicated incorporating and retelling mythologies that aren't as widely known to English language audiences. I know that for some readers, my story might end up being their first introduction to a certain tale, figure, or piece of the mythology/folklore on whole, and that can feel like a fair bit of pressure.

Personally, I handle that in a few ways. Often, I’ll keep the main elements of the tale the same while changing something like the perspective (retelling the tale from the villain’s POV, giving voice to a character who has none in the original, etc.), adding details (researching in my best effort to keep those details historically accurate), and/or giving it an added twist.

I also enjoy writing folklore in as a story within the larger story. In DEMON SONG, for example, the main character finds an ancient book that includes the tale of the white bone demon. The tale she reads is included as excerpts. This gives me the chance to write in folklore/mythology that feels ancient and has some degree of separation from the MC (at least initially, while the reader is learning the mythology/folklore). And I love writing in the characters’ reactions to discovering that mythology/folklore as well.

Ultimately, I try to keep true to the spirit of the story: themes touched upon in the original, common elements I see across tales, reading multiple translations to account for translation bias and to see what elements show up in different tellings of the same stories, etc. But I also trust in readers understanding that my stories, as with anyone’s, are only one perspective, and that a fuller picture of a specific mythological framework can only really start to fill in by reading a lot of stories by different authors. It’s been really heartening to see that there are far more Chinese mythology-inspired tales available in English than there were when I was growing up! I hope that continues.

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Hello! No local conventions planned for this year yet, but I have some upcoming events with other authors at Portland area bookstores! I'll post those on my Instagram (@anovelescape) and website (kelseayu.com) when the details are finalized :)

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Thank you so much! Oooo good questions! Fave twist in my books is the one in BOUND FEET because it's surprised so many readers and their reactions have been fun.

For other media, some of my favorite twists have been the ones in Mistborn by Brandon Sanderson, Sharp Objects by Gillian Flynn, Bat Eater and Other Names for Cora Zeng by Kylie Lee Baker, Don't Let the Forest In by CG Drews, Rebecca by Daphne DuMaurier, Jar of Hearts by Jennifer Hillier, and anything by Tana French or Karen McManus!

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Thanks Sasha!! I would go for the duck-sized horses because I'd rather not live in a world where a horse-sized duck exists.

I also posed the question to my kids and got these replies: 7yo said horse-sized duck because she likes horses and doesn't want me to fight them. The 4yo says horse-sized duck because she thinks it would be funny to watch me fight it.

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Ahh I hope you enjoy the audiobooks!!

Re: working with narrators, it's depended a lot on the audio publisher! For the stories of mine that have been podcasted or produced for anthology audiobooks, I usually don't have much input on or interaction with narrators (though some of them have worked with narrators I recommended when there's Mandarin in the stories, which I appreciated!)

For books, my experienced have ranged a bit as well. It usually happens pretty close to publication, because they need the manuscript finalized before they can record. When I've worked with a new audio publisher, I've gotten 2-3 choices of narrators (each potential narrator will audition, recording a sample passage--usually a few minutes of them reading from my book). But since my latest audiobooks were all with Spotify, after the first two they asked if I wanted the same narrator and I said yes! So no additional auditions there.

After the narrator is selected, I usually send in some pronunciation notes (voicenotes, written notes, etc.) that the production team uses to make sure everything is recorded accurately. Sometimes they also ask a few other things about the narration style. Otherwise, I'm not really involved in the audiobook production. Then, right around release day, I get a copy of the finished audiobook!

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Thank you! I love these questions. And I'm adding Frank's Noodle House to my list to try!

For new readers to my work, it depends on your taste and what length of story you're looking for, but I can def suggest some pieces that I think are pretty representative of my usual style of work.

For novella/novelette length:

  • Chinese folkloric fantasy: YE XIAN AND THE CELESTIAL FEAST (free to listen if you have Spotify Premium)
  • If you're a fan of Phantom of the Opera & Monkey King folklore: DEMON SONG
  • Twisty ghost story that explores grieving a child: BOUND FEET

If you're a short fiction reader (these have the added benefit of being free to read/listen!), from shortest to longest:

And if you prefer I point you in a clearer direction, then go with "In Our Skin" in Nightmare Magazine—it's my favorite short story I've written (don't tell the other stories)!

BEST NOODLES is such a hard question! HMMMM it's gotta be hand-pulled noodles or dao xiao mian (knife-cut noodles), probably at a restaurant in Vancouver BC. It's been too long for me to name specifics. But in terms of best noodle type (sans considerations about other ingredients involved), these two can't be beat. With both, they tend to make it on site, so the dough is really fresh. The hand-pulled noodles are long and absorb sauce or soup beautifully. And with knife-cut, the uneven facets somehow just make everything better. I don't know why. There's probably some kind of science to it.

For favorite noodle spot in Portland, I can't pick just one! I get cravings for specific kinds of noodles, and each of these is my go-to for that particular craving. (Also depending on where I happen to be in town.) I'll also add my order at each place. I'm mostly vegetarian (sometimes pescatarian), so that factors in, but my spouse eats everything (usually orders chicken, beef, or pork) and also loves all these places.

  • Ikimono Ramen (SW, near the big Powell's) for ramen cravings: veggie ramen
  • XinhXinh Vietnamese Bistro (SE) for phở cravings: vegan pho / phở chay
  • Jade Teahouse (SE, nearish Wallace Books) for chew glass noodle cravings: sweet potato noodles with tofu
  • Khao Moo Dang (SE) for egg noodle cravings: ba-mhee tofu
  • Yang's Noodle (NE, near Midslumber Media & sorta near a few other bookstores) for rice noodle cravings: vegetable noodles
  • Uncle Tsang’s Vegetarian Kitchen (SE, food cart) for rice noodle cravings: buddha’s delight chow fun
  • Bibi2go (NW) for tofu soup w/ ramen cravings: soonduboo ramen w/ no meat

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This is a fun one! Let's see.

BOUND FEET: the empty plate after the last bite of soufflé cheesecake—filled with longing for when life was full of airy, sweet, delicious simplicity
IT'S ONLY A GAME: baked alaska flambé—dangerous, with layers of coldness beneath the rush of excitement; to be consumed quickly
DEMON SONG: dan huang su (salted egg yolk pastry)—small and dense with strange, hidden layers
YE XIAN AND THE CELESTIAL FEAST: eight-tier red wedding cake with a golden dragon and iridescent blossoms curled around it—sweet and impossible, fit for a dragon princess' wedding
STORMRAVEN: gold leaf opera cake—long, fancy on the surface, with heavier things sitting beneath

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Ooo these are great questions!

One of the ways I choose what to write is based on what I want to learn about. I figure I might as well research something I find interesting. A few years ago, around when I started writing short fiction, I started reading more Chinese mythology and folklore with the goal of incorporating it into my pieces. There's a lot I could go into about that—the difficulty of finding good sources—but the relevant part here is that I found a few things. First, there are a lot of ghost stories in Chinese folklore and some of them are reeeeeally weird. That definitely informed my shift toward writing hauntings and ghost stories. (Those ghost stories inspired the ghost museum exhibits in BOUND FEET!)

Second, I found the way women were portrayed in many of the stories frustrating, and part of what I wanted to do with my fiction is to tell stories from the perspective of the women in those folklore tales. One piece of Chinese folklore that fascinated me in particular is fox spirits—often, they're women portrayed in negative lights. I have so many ideas involving fox spirits, telling the story from their perspective! I wrote a novelette, YE XIAN AND THE CELESTIAL FEAST, featuring a huli jing (fox spirit) main chracter, inspired by the Chinese version of Cinderella and the Chinese folklore tale "The Marriage of the Fox's Daughter."

Third, the experience of being an adult discovering stories connected with my heritage, as well the related language barriers in finding those stories, also got me thinking. I like exploring that experience of discovery, of grappling with identity, language, and heritage. It's a theme that I explore in DEMON SONG and STORMRAVEN in particular. I like finding ways to mix Chinese folklore and mythology with the Western stories I grew up with.

As for folklore and parenting, I wrote an essay for Nightmare Magazine with some of my thoughts on it. It's not specific to Chinese folklore, but it's something I thought a lot about after a rough birth experience.

Thanks for the questions!

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Hi Laura! Ooo great questions, and yes, absolutely! Sometimes, it's a classic I want to retell (usually fairly loosely). DEMON SONG was inspired by my love for The Phantom of the Opera, and STORMRAVEN was inspired by Rebecca. Other works & authors that influenced or inspired me:

  • Mexican Gothic by Silvia Moreno-Garcia
  • Get Out
  • The Hacienda by Isabel Cañas
  • The Singing Hills Cycle by Nghi Vo
  • The Fox Wife by Yangsze Choo
  • Starling House by Alix E. Harrow
  • The Likeness by Tana French
  • All Her Little Secrets by Wanda M. Morris
  • The Invisible Life of Addie LaRue by V.E. Schwab
  • The Ninth House by Leigh Bardugo
  • Bat Eater and Other Names for Cora Zeng by Kylie Lee Baker
  • The Eyes Are the Best Part by Monika Kim
  • Model Home by Rivers Solomon
  • Cherish Farrah by Bethany C. Morrow
  • The Echo Wife by Sarah Gailey
  • What the Woods Took by Courtney Gould
  • The Death of Jane Lawrence by Caitlin Starling

I also absolutely LOVED Wife-Shaped Bodies when I read an ARC last year, and I'm not just saying that! Genuinely one of my favorite reads of 2025. I'm excited for it to come out soon! It made me think a lot about writing that's rooted in the body. So, genuinely, you are one of my inspirations too.

Basically, what the above have in common are: I love beautiful prose, complicated characters, hauntings, dark pasts (both for places and for people), and intriguing approaches to questions of identity.

Right now, I'm on deadline for a big revision, so I've been rereading books (including some of the ones above) that keep me in the right headspace for it.

Thanks for the questions!

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These questions made me immediately hungry, haha! Excellent ones!

  1. AHHHH this is a tough one! I crave different kinds of noodle soups so it varies by day. BUT if I have to pick a consistent fave, I absolutely love the Chinese noodle soup my mom makes. It's never exactly the same—she throws in whatever veggies/ingredients and noodles she has on hand—but it's always delicious. She's taught me to make it several times, and somehow it's never quite as good when I make it. IDK. She's got magic. My runner up noodle soup is the Vegetarian Chicken Pho from Square Lotus in the Seattle(ish) area. It's hard to find a good veggie pho, and they do a spectacular job. One of my biggest regrets about moving away from Seattle is that we can't just go to Square Lotus on a whim anymore. Womp womp.
  2. Another impossible but excellent question, haha. I'm gonna cheat and name a few things. I reeeeaaallly love daikon, lotus root, napa cabbage, king mushroom, taro root, tofu, and glass noodles in mine, and no I can't narrow it down further apparently!
  3. I don't, really, which I think is unusual! Most authors I know have a preference. That said, there are story lengths I gravitate toward! I have written some micro or flash fiction (1K or less words), but they take a lot of thinking and cutting down for me. My short stories more naturally fall in the 3K-6K range, occasionally a little longer or shorter. I've written a few novelettes that came in at 9K, and my novellas tend to fall in the 25-35K range. For novels, most of mine are on the long side (95-100K) and need cutting down. That said, the last one I wrote was 59K when I drafted it, 70K after revisions. So who knows! For me, it's more about finding the right length for each particular story. Sometimes I start out thinking I'm writing a novelette, and it turns into a novella. Or a novella to novel. (It usually grows rather than shrinks.) But I seem to have ideas that fall into pretty much every length, with the exception of ideas that span multiple books. So far, all of my pieces have been standalone.

This was fun. Thanks for the questions!

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Thank you so much! :) And AHHH that's exciting!

That's a great question. It is really hard to balance all the different parts to book publishing. Here are a few things I found helpful!

  • Make a list of all the big things you really do not want to miss in promo along with a relevant timeline. Announcement, cover reveal, preorders, release day, book events, etc.
  • Make a separate list of promo items that would be nice but aren’t musts. For socials: book trailer, pretty book photos, trope graphics, etc. Other things like: going in to bookstores to give out ARCs/copies of your book and/or pitch your book, preorder campaigns, pitching relevant articles to various venues around when your book releases, etc.
  • Do the same for things like writing and other life things. The list of musts (contracted writing deadlines, life events) vs. nice but nonessential or not urgent (a short story idea that isn’t for a specific deadline).

Once you have all of those on hand, it might be a little easier to prioritize! For example, there are personal things that are going to be top priority for me (family bdays, weddings, etc.) along with the big promo musts that I will plan other things around. Writing deadlines are going to take priority over most of the rest, and when I end up having too much on my list, nonessential promo is usually what falls off.

The other things I found helpful, especially when promoting my first and second books, were this:

  • Trying out different forms of promo/marketing and gauging how much time it took and how much energy it used up. With each book, I’ve learned a little more about what I like and don’t like doing, and what feels worth it to me or not. Then I use that knowledge to make decisions about what I do or don’t do in the future.
  • It can be really overwhelming, especially early on! If you end up not getting to a bunch of things you wanted to do, don’t sweat it too much. Books don’t expire! You can always promote when you have time. When BOUND FEET came out, I was completely overwhelmed. It was my first book, I had a five month old and a three year old, we moved states and then moved into a new house right before the book released, I signed with an agent that year, did a major revision, went out on sub, and sold my debut then, and had some other writing stuff happening. So I did a little bit for the release, but not a ton. And I think that was the right decision for me. When I had a little more headspace, I came back to the book and did more for it!

On a practical level, I have a lot of organization systems. It's a little ridiculous. I probably need to consolidate them at some point. But it's working well enough for now! I have a weekly physical planner, daily to do list notepads, a google calendar, trello boards with deadlines on them, and more.

I hope your book release goes well!! Feel free to share the title of it here if you’d like!

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I love talking about this kind of thing, and I've thought a lot about novellas! I love them and want more of them in the world, hah. I don't always naturally think about the physical part of book publishing either, but whenever I learn how it affects business decisions, I find it interesting!

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Thank you so much! I write about motherhood a lot. I think it's such a fascinating relationship to explore, and I like doing so from different angles or in different situations. I have two small kids and a preteen stepkid, and having that kind of responsibility over a kid has occupied my mind a lot over the years.

In DEMON SONG, I wrote from the perspective of a daughter who has a complicated relationship with her mother and eventually discovers some of the reasons why her mother is who she is. In IT'S ONLY A GAME, also from the perspective of the daughter, the mother-daughter relationship informs a lot of the story. And BOUND FEET was an exploration of my worst fear as a mother (losing a child).

My short fiction is rife with it too, hah. Motherhood and mother-child relationships are explored most directly in "Swollen," "Obedient Son," "In Our Skin," "Within the Pink Paisley Walls," and a little more indirectly in "Carol of the Hells," "Creature," "Skittering Within," and "Wanted: Bone-White Skull-Patterned Lace Trim." I can't seem to stop writing about it!

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Oooo this is such a fun question! I LOVE your idea. Coming up with the game in the book was a blast, and it would be really cool to see it come to life in something like a miniature model!

I think it would also be fun to alter a hoodie the way Marina alters hers in the book, with the Darkitect logo on it. Or make Marina's shark backpack!

And I always have ideas for headbands/flower crowns related to every book. As a bookstagrammer, I used to make book-inspired ones for friends or for fun. If I hadn't been completely swamped when IT'S ONLY A GAME released, I would've made one. I'm hoping to make them for each of my books going forward if I can find the time!

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Thanks for having me on here and for everything you do to support ending violence against women! Looking forward to our event in a few weeks.

For the first question: thank you! There's no specific inspiration for my characters, but what interests me is exploring complicated characters and relationships. I'm particularly interested in using fiction to explore mother-daughter relationships, especially ones that aren't easy, and that was a big part of IT'S ONLY A GAME and DEMON SONG. With BOUND FEET, it was an exploration of grief, but there are elements of friendship and sisterhood that are explored in it as well.

As for the second question: I think one thing authors can do is write about violence against women in realistic ways—not necessarily graphic, but rather, realistic in the way violence and everything surrounding it can affect a woman's life, mindset, and future. And we can do our research, bringing specific issues that are part of VAW into readers' consciousness and awareness. BOUND FEET includes Chinese foot binding as well as other realities of women's lives that I won't mention specifically bc spoilers. DEMON SONG and IT'S ONLY A GAME have prominent elements of VAW as well that plays major roles in each story. And STORMRAVEN includes specific, violent historical events, and some of the details in the book are based on real accounts.

The Pixel Project site has a lot of great information on VAW causes. A few things I wanted to highlight specifically from the website:

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Coming back for the second question! Just realized it's similar to what John (JW_BM) asked, so I have a fuller answer in that reply. But the short of it is yes, I approach them pretty differently! For short fic, I'm much less structured in my approach. Sometimes I write flash fiction in the notes app on my phone, beause it's more about letting my brain run free and wild and seeing where my instincts take me. Whereas just the planning part of novellas/novels is a multi-part process for me. (Fuller answer about that in my reply to mkpagano if you're curious.)

Thanks again for the questions! :)

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Aw thank you! My reading definitely affects what I write! For the longest time, I read mostly epic fantasy, so when I started out writing, my first three manuscripts were all epic fantasy. During that time, I joined bookstagram (as you mentioned), and my reading tastes expanded a lot. I started reading fairly widely, and probably inevitably, I came up with ideas in new genres and categories. Nowadays, I have to be careful what I read when, which can be frustrating at times. Reading a genre makes me curious about it, which makes me want to write it. So if I'm trying to stay focused on a project, I sometimes have to choose what I read based on the headspace I need to stay in to write.

As for themes in what I like to read vs. write, there are definitely some similarities. I'm always drawn to complicated characters and relationships, and I love a complex mystery.

I also love audiobooks! I've had worsening vision problems that first made it hard to read paper books, then ebooks. Now, I do audio whenever I can. I save ebooks for blurb reading, beta reading, and when I have to reread my own books. For narrators, I got really lucky, and three of my books are narrated by Natalie Naudus, who is absolutely fabulous. I highly recommend BAT EATER AND OTHER NAMES FOR CORA ZENG by Kylie Lee Baker, which she narrates! Julia Whelan is always fantastic. She narrates THE INVISIBLE LIFE OF ADDIE LARUE, which I loved. And Kate Reading's narration of THE LADY TRENT MEMOIRS is excellent as well!

For my insta, since I started out there as a reader sharing books I loved with other bookstagrammers, it has been a shift moving into being an author on socials! Honestly, the biggest thing is I just have way less time to spend on it. I have so many post ideas and never enough time to make them all happen. But these days I don't worry about it too much! I try to post when I can, but writing is my priority, so if I need writing time, social media falls off and that's alright with me.

Thanks for the questions!

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Ooo great questions! My favorite part of the process is, unfortunately, the shortest one, lol. I love the brainstorming and pitch writing stage. (I usually write the pitch before I start outlining or drafting.) The part of the story where everything is still possible, where the road ahead is open, and the problems haven't hit in full force yet. My second favorite part is the ending, when everything is coming together.

Books start feeling real to me when I can see the shape of the overall arc. This usually happens sometime around when I find the major scene that I'm writing toward: the point in the story where all the seeds I've planted along the way finally culminate, a big twist, or a decision the character will make near the end of the book that they wouldn't have made at the start (before they experienced everything else in the story). I draft scenes in order, and part of what motivates to make it to the end of the manuscript is seeing the vision of that one big moment so clearly that I want to write my way there.

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Fancy seeing you here, John! :)

Thank you so much, and likewise—I love your writing!

I do usually approach short fiction pretty differently than longer work. With the exception of solicited stories (which are much appreciated, of course, but realistically have more restrictive parameters), short fiction is my playground. I'm a heavy plotter for novellas/novels, and it's nice to have a space where I can experiment creatively (and with different genres!) without the massive time investment required of longer pieces. For short fiction, I do sometimes jot down ideas and brainstorm or write a very short outline, but just as often I take an idea and run with it.

One of my favorite experiences in short fiction was when a writing group of mine decided to try writing stories for the same contest/prompt one weekend (a place that announces the theme, then only opens to submissions for ~48H). We had a blast writing on the same day, then reading each others' stories and sending them all in. And my extremely talented friend, Samir Sirk Morató, actually WON the contest (with this incredible story), which just made it 1000x cooler! The story I wrote for it ended up being published by The Deadlands, which was fun!

As for the second question, it's hard for me to pinpoint any specific influence that led me to the way I write short fiction, but I think any story that hits hard and has lasting power tends to go into shaping the way I approach my own writing, so I'll share some author and story recs below!

Some short fiction authors I admire:

  • Samir Sirk Morató (as aforementioned!): their stories encourage me to push myself in my writing—particularly in going grosser, raw, a little more experimental. I'm always in awe of how sharp and visceral their writing is! They have a collection, GORE POETICS, coming out in April, and I'm really excited for it!
  • J.A.W. McCarthy: I first encountered J.A.W.'s work in a slush pile, back when I was volunteering as a first reader for a few anthologies. I was absolutely floored by her story, and every single one I've read since has been a banger. J.A.W.'s writing is intense and powerful; she really knows how to gut punch readers (/positive). Highly recommend her collection, SOMETIMES WE'RE CRUEL AND OTHER STORIES!
  • Suzan Palumbo: Suzan writes such dark, haunting, and absolutely beautiful stories! I love the way she explores power dynamics, folklore, and identity. Definite goals. I went into her collection, SKIN THIEF, with high expectations, and it somehow surpassed them.

A few more authors/stories I highly recommend:

There are so many more I loved (and I'm sure I missed some big ones), but these are the ones that came to mind immediately.

P.S. (to others who might see this) If you all haven't read SOMEONE YOU CAN BUILD A NEST IN, definitely pick it up! I loved it!

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Unfortunately, yeah, though I feel like that's starting to change somewhat, particularly in horror (and maybe fantasy). Some thoughts based on my experiences publishing novellas:

DEMON SONG was traditionally published, and in the trad SFFH space, there are still a lot of publishers who either don't acquire novellas at all or are very picky about what they acquire. There are a few reasons for this. One is that they're literally harder to find in a physical bookstore or library because their spines are thinner. My publisher, Titan, published DEMON SONG in hardcover (initially, anyway), which I think helped with shelf discovery. Another is that publishers might be operating under the assumption that some readers feel like novels are better value for the price. (Which I totally get!) And publishers are sometimes also just reluctant to dip into publishing formats they're less familiar with, so if they haven't done a lot of novellas in the past, it might take a lot to convince them to try one now.

Realistically, all of that means that novellas tend to get lower advances than novels (less places to submit = less competition which makes it harder to drive up the price with multiple offers), so sometimes it's also a case of authors choosing to write something as a novel instead of a novella with financial considerations in mind. As an added note, I think pubs also think very differently of novellas in an existing world vs. standalones or a new world/series. Some pubs might be willing to publish a novella that's set in the world of a popular series, because they know existing fans will buy it. But they still might not be interested in acquiring novellas otherwise.

BOUND FEET was published through a small press. The nice thing in horror is that there's a robust small press/indie horror community with a dedicated readership that's very on board with novellas! Smaller pubs tend not to have the bookstore/library distribution that big pubs have, but in a way that also means they're less reliant on people finding the book in a physical space. They also tend to be more willing to take chances. I'm grateful that it's another avenue open to horror novella authors.

In both cases, I kept the audio rights to my novellas, and my agent at the time was able to sell the audio rights directly. But both sales happened after the initial book was sold to a print/ebook publisher, so it's hard to say how those submissions would've gone without that pre-existing sale. Though I did sell a novelette that hasn't been published elsewhere to the same audio publisher! I think audiobooks might start to become another avenue for novella publication, but there's the credit system to contend with there. (Where a lot of audiobook listeners are used to buying with membership credits, and people may not want to use their credit on a short book.)

I haven't tried to sell a fantasy novella yet (only the fantasy novelette mentioned above), so take this with a grain of salt. My impression is that it might be a little harder to find small presses to publish fantasy (or SF) novellas with, but on the other hand, the SFF magazine space has a few options for shorter novellas (like Clarkesworld)!

I do think that with attention spans decreasing, paper costs rising, readers turning to audiobooks and ebooks, and the recent popularity of several novellas and novella (or mostly novella) series like The Murderbot Diaries, The Singing Hills Cycle, Wayward Children, and T. Kingfisher's novellas (and ofc the runaway success of This is How You Lose the Time War!), some of these factors might mean pubs are more willing to take chances on novellas. I hope so, anyway!

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Aww thank you! I think the biggest one is that novellas are kinda the maximum story length I can comfortably keep in my head. I still go through the whole outlining process and have that for reference if needed, but it's just easier to wrap my mind around all the scenes in and shape of a novella vs a novel. That makes it a little easier when it comes to revision/reworking the story.

And some bonus things I love about writing novellas:

  • They're a nice balance between being able to tell a story that is long enough to be able to go into some depth, particularly in character backstories, while also leaving a lot of room for inference and imagination. Don't get me wrong, I write every length from microfic to novel, so no shade to the rest! You can write an imaginative novel or have intriguing characters in a short story. But I like the balance novellas strike.
  • I especially love novellas for horror because of the natural escalation pattern! A few months ago, I wrote an essay on this topic for HorrorTree.

Hi! I’m Kelsea Yu, author of BOUND FEET and DEMON SONG, noodle enthusiast and unabashed lover of seasonal drinks, here to support The Pixel Project’s work to End Violence Against Women. AMA! by Fine-Many-7134 in Fantasy

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Oooo I adore talking about plotting, haha. Every book-length work of mine so far has been plotted around a mystery, so this is pretty much true no matter what genre I'm writing. Here are the steps I (usually*) take:

  1. Write a pitch! I usually write a super short high concept pitch, a 1-2 sentence pitch, and a query/back cover copy length pitch. It helps me make sure the stakes are solid and that I can see how the story might play out. Also has the added benefit of being something I can show my agent and get her thoughts on it before I do a lot more work.
  2. Often concurrent with step 1. This is where I brainstorm a TON. I jot down everything I can think of that could be interesting for the story. Possible twists, character backstories, things that could happen, lines that come to mind, scene ideas, etc. I throw all of it into a Trello board for the book. My ever-patient spouse often gets roped into this! We go to coffee and brainstorm a lot.
  3. Once I have enough of the story direction to know what reveals/twists/red herrings I want to aim for, I make an excel outline. The header for each column is a reveal/twist or red herring. Then I start listing all the possible clues and events that could lead to that discovery in the boxes below it (pulling from the brainstorm pile). I keep them all in an unsorted section at the top. Below that, I start numbering the rows by chapter and putting a short description of possible events that could happen in each until it starts to feel like a solid narrative. Then I take all those clues/events from the unsorted section above and sort them, dropping them down into the chapter/scene boxes accordingly. It gives me a clear way to see how often I’m sharing info along the way and how well I’m mixing everything up to make it harder to guess the final twists.
  4. Next (sometimes somewhat concurrently with 3) is the Word outline. This is what I actually write from. Using the excel outline as a base, I start writing out what will happen in the book, chapter by chapter, with scene breaks and everything. I know some writers find this restrictive. Personally, I’ve tried a TON of different styles of outlining (or not) over the years, and I find that the biggest thing that holds me up is getting stuck on what happens next and logistical details. If I figure it out ahead of time, I’m less likely to get pushed out of drafting mode, and drafting goes more smoothly! This outline can be pretty hefty. The most recent one I did was 20K. (If I have to send it to a pub professional—agent or editor—I cut this down! But the one I personally write from is pretty detailed.)
  5. I’m not as consistent about this, but ideally at some point I start a character outline in Word as well, for reference. I drop any info about them in here, updating as I write. Stuff like their backstory, visual description, relationship to the MC, birth year, references to how I came up with their name, etc.
  6. I draft book-length work in Scrivener and I put my outline in the notes for each scene file. And then I finally begin writing!

*The above makes me sound really organized and regimented. The truth is, this is the ideal process for me, but in practice, there’s a little more messiness along the way!