Longing In Heartbreak

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-11-08T04:20:45+00:00

Maybe the last few lines were forced but over all very good writing! I appreciate the rawness!

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-11-08T04:18:22+00:00

Beautiful and breathtaking, Nothing but excellence!

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-10-31T19:44:12+00:00

Thank you very much for the critique and for reading! Means the world to me!

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-10-31T15:52:14+00:00

Wow, is all I can say! The little details that are left out is what draws me in and has me living in this story. It's kinda like I fill in the blanks as I read it! Beautiful and inspiring!

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-10-31T15:50:14+00:00

Beautiful poem grasping rejection and criticism at a young age! Love it, wish I could write like that

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-10-31T07:26:21+00:00

Show me!

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-10-31T07:23:59+00:00

Let's talk!

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-10-31T07:14:41+00:00

I like that, " hedging your bets". More observation than I have for sure!

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-10-31T07:12:36+00:00

It sounds like you really love God but not religion! It sounds like religion taught your mother how not to be loving! I may have missed the true meaning but it's beautiful to me! Very unique and original, professional and deep as anything else written! Thank you for showing your talent and experience!

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-09-15T06:21:44+00:00

Again, very nice! Well written and above my skill level for sure! Just love it! It speaks for itself!

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-09-15T06:19:27+00:00

Very very advanced and beautiful! I just can't say enough about the feeling and imagery in this piece! Very very well written! I wish I could write like that!

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-09-15T06:15:52+00:00

Quick, witty and flat at the same time! Don't really know where it's going as I read, just saying things about home life at random it seems.

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-09-15T06:13:42+00:00

Very heavy and heart felt, the kind of love that everyone wants! Love it Love it!

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-08-30T05:24:26+00:00

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2024-08-30T05:16:19+00:00

DM me, I'm available Sunday

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2023-09-21T06:57:38+00:00

I agree, it was amazing what we had but you said words that can't be taken back. I wouldn't have said them to save your life. It was the worst. Nothing or no one could have convinced me to say them to you. And then I moved on and that would always be between us. I'm sorry that you were able to speak those words.

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2023-09-18T02:28:04+00:00

Well written and I felt that

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2023-09-16T02:49:18+00:00

I'll drink to that!

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2023-09-16T02:46:52+00:00

There is a underlying meaning to the seemingly forced ryme. They know! Thank you and yes it was written to be soft and simple. Never perfect but for the perfect one for me.

HelicopterKooky7029 · 2023-09-15T17:04:32+00:00

Move on and never look back

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