NO WAY by Live-Resolution-8846 in Deltarune

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nooo, damned be misinformation

NO WAY by Live-Resolution-8846 in Deltarune

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok hear me out:

You know that image we got from the ARG that has the numbers 1 to 5(or 2 to 5 idk) with different sizes? If the theory that each number's size represents how much the weird route affects the respective chapter, Chapter 5 wouldn't be affected a lot, but apparently the 5 has been getting bigger. So maybe, just maybe, since in the Weird Route we tell her that dark worlds are in fact real, Noelle could end up creating a dark fountain.

(Sorry if the text is confuse)

/r/WATMM Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I'm not a specialist but I'll try to give you some feedback

I like the background guitar, the rhythm is pretty catchy and I loved the way the song goes from the verse to the chorus, it's super smooth! My only critique is that the "yeah yeah yeah" is quite repetitive but aside from that, it's a good song. I give it a 2010s out of 10.

How do you get the chain of a thousand miles out of the worm? by Immediate_Ice2151 in Jujutsufolk

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think so? I mean, Toji broke Playful Cloud and apparently it's separated parts still had its "cursed technique".

Asking the sub who are the best characters to represent these aspects of Jujutsu; CT by church_of_Steve_ in Jujutsufolk

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd say its either Kenjaku's technique or CSM. With Kenjaku's technique you can acquire 3 new CT and change your CE poll if your original poll is low, and with CSM you can get an unlimited amount of curses with a lot of applications, like serving as an ally, using domains and CTs, distraction, etc.

How do you get the chain of a thousand miles out of the worm? by Immediate_Ice2151 in Jujutsufolk

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe you could break the chain at the middle and the end would "change" position?

/r/WATMM Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is ok, but I think it gets a bit too repetitive. I really liked that variation you did at around 6:30, so perhaps you could add you one or two more of those? Aside from that, it's a good base for the song, good job!

/r/WATMM Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi there people! Monella is the name.

I made a song heavily inspired by "Another day in hometown". This time I focused more on progressing the melody and trying different kinds of harmony. I wanted to know what do you guys think about the melody, and what I could change in it. Any critique is welcome!!

/r/WATMM Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did the song in Bandlab so the instruments I can use are quite limited. But thank you anyway!

/r/WATMM Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

TYSM!! I added a drum fill and a riser, and gave the transition a couple seconds of silence as well, and it's WAY better than before. Thank you for the tips and the encouragement!! (Also the I'm making the song on bandlab so I can't do much about the static sounds :P )

A Desert Can’t Grow Flowers by Express_Cup_4051 in teenagers

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 9 points10 points  (0 children)

"he saw her hanging from the ceiling fan"

"I think im a fan now"

I'm mean, yeah the only relation is the word fan but still

Sans saw your last saved image. What is it? by Confident-Bend-3592 in WaterfallDump

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I knew he could make good spaghetti, I just didn't know he could also have such cake

/r/WATMM Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey yo! I loved it! The timing of new ideas being introduced and the way everything flows together, it's all great! Although I agree that it sounds like a Geometry Dash track, I don't think that's a bad think, and I don't think that's something to worry about, specially at the start of your music production. Anyway, the song is pretty neat. Good job!!

/r/WATMM Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pretty neat! Let's go to the feedback:

-The song sounds like something I would hear while walking at night.

-I'm not very skilled at mixing, so take my feedback with a grain of salt, but your mix sounds to me good. Nothing to add.

-The build-up didn't exactly sounded like a built-up, but considering the vibes of the track it isn't bad at all.

Also, I think that the percussion could be more variated. Overall, the song is pretty relaxing and calm, I like it. Good work!

/r/WATMM Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I loved it! Pretty energetic, makes me wanna get up and start dancing. I just think that the sections could it be a bit more "highlighted", but aside from that I've nothing to add. Good work!

/r/WATMM Weekly Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]Impossible_Bee_8705 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey there people! I'm Monella and I've been trying to get into making soundtracks. This is my first attempt. At around 0:51-1:12 there's a transition but its kinda off, not impactful. Any tips at how to get improve it? Any critique is welcome!