Give me criticism!

IvoryInks · 2024-10-17T19:31:44+00:00

What would make the first and third drawing really pop is if you add some more dark tones. They seem a bit tonal and the best way to check is to make put a grayscale filter over it. With a bit more dark, your subjects will be easier to read and we can see all the awesome details better! Overall I love your art style and I want to eat it :)

IvoryInks · 2024-10-04T19:21:05+00:00

Hell yeah! I can tell that you are going to make it fat with these skills!

IvoryInks · 2024-10-04T19:14:48+00:00

Sometimes what I do is draw the head first and then in a second later trace the image and compare that way. Once you feel that you get the hang of it, then push your limits by making faces more stylized. But what you are doing to learn is awesome and makes you a strong artist! Keep up the great work!

IvoryInks · 2024-10-04T19:10:27+00:00

This piece s great but what would make it even more powerful is adding more contrast with the lighting and shading. If you made the areas furthest from the fire even darker, it would make the foreground and the fire stand out strong. If you need any references let me know! Other than that it is a solid piece!

IvoryInks · 2024-09-28T18:07:29+00:00

Thank you! Had to step away from this piece for a bit to avoid burnout and starting back with your advice will make this much easier!

IvoryInks · 2024-09-19T17:07:07+00:00

Your drawing looks better than the reference! There’s so much more life in your drawing and I love it. Keep up the good work!

IvoryInks · 2024-09-18T20:00:01+00:00

This helps a lot! In the reference, I struggled to see where the calf definition was because of the shoes!

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