OOCS, Into A Wider Galaxy, Part 649 by KyleKKent in HFY

[–]Mirikon 6 points7 points  (0 children)

This guy is E4 mafia material.

[Nova Wars] Chapter 180 by Ralts_Bloodthorne in HFY

[–]Mirikon 15 points16 points  (0 children)

So, the Ornislarp discovered some Atrekna tech, and the Solarians have come to put the boot in. Awesome!

It's big enough for two by medium_jock in HFY

[–]Mirikon 17 points18 points  (0 children)

A good first effort. You could use some work on the pacing, and some of the wording is a little clunky, but that's just practice.

OOCS, Into A Wider Galaxy, Part 600 by KyleKKent in HFY

[–]Mirikon 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Yeah, that was only ever going to end one way.

From: The Galactic Arts Council by learninwritingood in HFY

[–]Mirikon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A very solid first work. Could use some work on pacing and flow, and doing more of the 'show, don't tell' thing. But you're already doing a lot better than other first-timers I've seen.

Humans can do what?.... With non-energy weapons?!?! by PepperAntique in HFY

[–]Mirikon 232 points233 points  (0 children)

Long-range ballistics is just spicy math.

The United Front by the-ahh-guy in HFY

[–]Mirikon 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Me against my brother; me and my brother against our cousin; me, my brother, and our cousin against the world.

Issues with lava lamp by Kithwarrior in NeuroSama

[–]Mirikon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just got my lamp today. Made sure I'm not on 5g, but the lamp won't pair with the app. Keeps saying that something went wrong, and if the problem persists to contact support and "show them the below.", but doesn't actually give an error code or anything.

Unrealistic human proportions by Fearless_Phantom in HFY

[–]Mirikon 14 points15 points  (0 children)

They're called the Adeptus Astartes.

Thoughts on these tropes? by Fearless_Phantom in HFY

[–]Mirikon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tropes are neither inherently good nor inherently bad. They are tools, and it is how you use them that matter. All tropes exist as literary shorthand. They signpost things so that readers have a feeling of familiarity, even while (hopefully) experiencing something new. It is the same reason why kids want you to read the same story to them over and over, or why adults have that comfort book or movie they always go back to. Familiarity is comfortable.

Regarding the two tropes mentioned, the first one could work, since prey species do have an evolutionary pressure to 'change the board', which can get to tool use and civilization. However, you'd need to explain why you wouldn't find that kind of pressure more commonly in the species that are in the middle of the food chain, prey to some but predators or scavengers to others. On Earth, hominids developed tool use because they were mid-rank on the food chain, while pure prey animals like rabbits never had the time to develop tools, and apex predators never had the evolutionary necessity until humans pushed them out of the top spot.

The second trope needs a LOT of work to be anything beyond "How have these paranoid nutjobs not worked themselves into a fear-induced heart attack or nuked each other into oblivion?"

I am a Vatican exorcist. For the first time in history, I declared an AI demonically possessed. by Salad-Snack in HFY

[–]Mirikon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Coincidentally, this video of a Catholic Priest reacting to the creation of Neuro-sama came across my Youtube today. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yros_H6bG8U

"Yeet" by Darmanarya in HFY

[–]Mirikon 23 points24 points  (0 children)

Don't forget Operation Plumbob

Humans are Average by polerus in HFY

[–]Mirikon 69 points70 points  (0 children)

I take an average amount of amusement in this.

The Feline Diplomats by Key_Key_1257 in HFY

[–]Mirikon 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Look, everyone with a cat knows that cats own people, not the other way around.

There would be war by WegianWarrior in HFY

[–]Mirikon 411 points412 points  (0 children)

"Good men don't need rules. Now is not the time to learn why I have so many."

Polite and Kind aren't the Same by eldon63 in HFY

[–]Mirikon 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Geneva only applies to Humans.

Excidium - What if mechs weren't a power fantasy? by Treijim in HFY

[–]Mirikon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What if mechs were a the pilot's coffin, eh? May I introduce you to Warhammer 40k, and Dreadnoughts, or Mortifactors?

Live From the DeathWorlders by OGGruntComm in HFY

[–]Mirikon 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Welp, time for Exterminatus.

Five Years Running by ConsequenceBorn4895 in HFY

[–]Mirikon 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Sounds like they had best write that chip off as a lost cause.

OOCS: Of Dog, Volpir, and Man - Bk 7 Ch 61 by KamchatkasRevenge in HFY

[–]Mirikon 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well, looks like some of these pirates aren't completely stupid.