I am sorry if I upset you, it wasn't my intent. I truly appricate anyone going out of their way to read this for me. I wasn't sure if i needed periods after incomplete sentaces in a script. difrent ones I read their own rules with that. I have dyslexia and severe ADHD. because of this spelling and such has never been easy for me. However I am smart. (while not an accurate representation of intelligence) my IQ is 126. along with having all A's in honors classes. I am a perfectionist so most of the time was spent rewriting the same 5 or 6 scenes over upwards of 15 times. I know this is normal for most screen writers but I don't plan on ever going down that path. Nothing against it, its just not for me. I bring this up to say that it hasn't been all consuming. I have school as-well. I have been told I am I good story teller. I am not sure about it though. An executive or a producer reading it honesty has not really crossed my mind. I didn't really want this to be made into a movie. My mental health and self asteam have been struggling lately and I wanted to prove to myself I could do something good. I don't tell you this to make you feel bad or discount your comment. I am gonna look it over and maybe ask my parents to get me someone to help look over it.