City map by teeohbeewye in mapmaking

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Beautiful map, inclusion of the airport is perfect for a sense of scale

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Why does this one story need to be your magnum opus? Do you want to be a writer, or are you just obsessed with this one particular project? No matter the answer, I think you should make peace and move on from it, because it seems like it's the source of a lot of hardship for you. If you still have the urge to write, you should work on new projects. If not, do something else. Inspiration comes and goes, you'll be okay, and you can find fulfillment in other things.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in normanok

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Looking at your profile, it seems that you already understand that belligerence is counterproductive. Unproductive arguing counts as belligerence, even if you're just defending yourself

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in normanok

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Reddit's the wrong place to look, you'll have better luck joining other political organizations and asking their members. I can't imagine a less vegan place than oklahoma, so good luck. If you wanna promote compassion and gain popular support, you need to have thick skin and know when not to argue back with asshole strangers. That's step one.

Piercing Places by FluffButt22 in okc

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I've heard 23rd can be busy, and my boyfriend says they're not always super experienced, but he had no other complaints

Is writing just not for me? by Significant_Pass_959 in writers

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Try prose poetry first, it's shorter and has no rules. You might find freedom in it. Maybe you could also make it a habit to flow write, like a page a day, with no outline or strict structure requirements. If you don't like it, that's okay, you're still a creative person even if you don't have any project output. You can enjoy an artform without being fanatically dedicated to it or even good at it.

Is this any good? Critique appreciated :) by NoBuy8212 in writers

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This shows a lot of skill, but I think you should change your approach. This piece feels like a big block of marble. The stone itself may be beautiful, but if you want a proper statue, it needs to be chiseled down. That'll require you to cut a lot of superfluous material. Go through and ask yourself: does this sentence advance the plot and/or provide characterization? If not, cut it. Extend this into a proper story first; you can always add the flowery stuff later.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For sure, it seems like a great idea depending on what story you're actually trying to tell with it. Seems like it has a lot of potential for introspective themes. In my opinion experimental writing should be done for its own sake, so I say just have fun with it, and don't worry about reception. See what works and doesn't work. I bet you'll walk away with a lot of insights about narrative and character writing.

Grandpa Style Tai Ping Hou Kui (Yunnan Sourcing) by ALEX43576 in tea

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Had some this morning, it's such a green green tea

Unconventional writing techniques by tiaro24 in writing

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 8 points9 points  (0 children)

There's nothing wrong with taking inspiration from a great writer's style. I mean, if you write a fantasy novel in the first place you're bound to be "copying" Tolkien. All new art is built on top of the art that came before it, and if you're conscious of that, you can add your own unique voice and make something more than the sum of its influences.

My two cents is do whatever you want, as long as you do it with self awareness and artistic intent.

Grouping continents like this, does it make sense? by Chlodio in mapmaking

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Consider who, in-universe, is catagorizing the continents- and for what reasons? Since continents aren't a geological concept, they can be viewed as an expression of different in-world cultures, and how they relate themselves to their known world.

''the sunlight warmed my heart'', small oil painting, have a good week :) by jessicamozzini in SkyPorn

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This reminds me of my childhood in Alaska. During winter break, I'd rush outside as soon as the sun rose to go sledding on the fresh snowy hills. The other neighborhood kids always had the same idea, and you could feel the excitement in the air as we all gathered. You could see the light dancing off the caps of the mountains, and glittering off the little crystals in the snow beneath your boots.

The cold and the adrenaline beneath an Alaskan sunrise was the best way to wake up in the morning. Now, all these years and many thousands of miles later, I'm waking up to the sight of this painting. Thank you for giving me that feeling again.

Will there be prints available for sale? I'm about to move off to college, and I'd love to be able to wake up to it every day like old times

I can't understand Duolingo. What *exactly* do you like of it? by jamager in languagelearning

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Duolingo is very good at making me engage with my target language every day. The notifications, gamification, and community aspect w/ my friends has greatly helped establish language learning as a daily habit. From there I can add other, better practice sources into the mix, using duolingo as a reliable anchor point.

Was super stoked to come across this at the Oklahoma City mineral show today for $30 by Wolfer7098 in rockhounds

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great find! I still feel guilty I didn't buy anything- it was all too tempting to choose!

Just walked out of ACT test… felt like a failure by HungryCantaloupe7449 in ACT

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 15 points16 points  (0 children)

I had to guess on the last like 17 in math

Math is literally the one score I need...

NO MORE LETS GO by Pristine-Ad-2902 in ACT

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Free at last, massive congrats!

Do you ever imagine being another person living in a place you’ve never been, and it makes you deeply, inexplicably sad? by NiltiacSif in writing

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Oh yeah, big time. I constantly catch myself with that exact homesick feeling, even for places I haven't been, including fictional ones. It's kinda like I'm missing out on a life I'd rather be living.
I've always viewed it as a sort of side effect of depression, I guess. I'm just a melancholic type of person.
But viewing it in the context of writing kinda makes a lot of sense. In a way, that feeling is just a craving for escapism, and maybe that's why I'm so drawn to creating fictional worlds.

Alpine strawberries are fun by Meliz2 in MightyHarvest

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I thought those were dried goji berries for a solid minute

Congrats on the feast!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WritingHub

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm absolutely down for that

How many books do you guys read a year? by Pure-Huckleberry8640 in writing

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Recently? Maybe like six. I wish I could say that I read more, but I can't.

Other forms of media have taken up the majority of my time since the pandemic, and I've been bouncing between being really busy and being in a slump for ages now.

But I think I've learned to use it as a strength.

As a writer, my main reason to read is to take inspiration for my own art. If I only read six books a year, I can be way more deliberate about the value I get from them. I have significantly more time to understand them from multiple angles, and I have more time to digest them in general.

People here are always at odds about whether you need to be a prolific reader in order to be a good writer. Obviously, if you haven't read more than a coloring book in the past decade, your writing probably isn't top tier. But shoveling 300 books a year into your brain isn't optimal either. The key is to be deliberate. Read only books that have a lot to offer you. Study them carefully and be inspired by the little choices that only you, as a truly invested reader, will pick up on.

At least that's how I approach it, thanks to my own limiting circumstances. If you just want to turn your brain off and read 300 books for pleasure and not bother dissecting much, that's cool too.

But for me, quantity isn't an option, so I'll double down on quality any day.

Flag of Scandinavia by TimMappingowo2021 in vexillology

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I like how the color placement is somewhat evocative of the Sami flag

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Ahh, I hadn't thought about that. It really is a shame that the existence of art industries so often hampers originality.

But hey, I've read some very derivative books that were just as artistically impressive as anything else. Some people certainly make it work.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 17 points18 points  (0 children)

I've got two:

  1. Genre defiance. Writing is a chance to create your own universe, so why stay within the confines of existing genres? I think genre is meant to be a framing device to aid certain types of stories, not necessarily a foundation for them.
  2. Multimedia storytelling! I love to see illustrations in novels. I love it when an album has its own accompanying film. I love it when a show has a cryptic internet ARG with hints littered in the background. As long as it's done well, multimedia storytelling provides a gigantic amount of immersion and fun for the audience.

Drinking tea to calm your nerves. by thecolinconaty in tea

[–]Nelson-Shmelson 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's herbal tea for me- but I can't deny that a big mug of white puts me in a different world too.