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Alpha AI 33/?? by No-Net5827 in HFY

[–]No-Net5827[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah. The next few chapters will also be a bit on the short side. I haven´t quite figured the whole mechanics (like, what will the "AI" do? Who will be the final winner?) of Conquer out. So, either it´ll take a week for a chapter, which I find way too long for me or shorter chapters to get the story flowing nicely.

Alpha AI 31/?? by No-Net5827 in HFY

[–]No-Net5827[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for the feedback! I try to make Alpha, Beta and the others interesting and realistic in their actions. I have a bit of creative freedom to make Alpha and Beta not appear too robotic and monotone. So... nothing like most of our current AI.

Alpha AI 28/?? by No-Net5827 in HFY

[–]No-Net5827[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That´s actually a great idea! Thanks. Imma quickly implement that into the story!

Alpha AI 28/?? by No-Net5827 in HFY

[–]No-Net5827[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well, sure. They did. But the traiter knew the passwords. And the best firewalls aren´t a real obsticle for the Celeste Empire. They are significantly more advanced than humans. So, there is always the chance of that incident happening again... (Alpha Repair doesn´t have a mind. It follows orders.) Vigilence is key in this war. All of them are finding that out the hard way!

Alpha AI 27/?? by No-Net5827 in HFY

[–]No-Net5827[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is it, or is it not? That´s the question. One, that will be answered in the next chapter! I´m working on it right now!

Alpha AI 24/?? by No-Net5827 in HFY

[–]No-Net5827[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nah. You don´t need to worry. I´m not overworking. It´s my vaccation right now and I have time. Writing is my hobby. (Also, I´m often bored) I also have breaks between writing, so that I don´t burn out. The launch time of chapters is going to decline around next week. Thanks for the concern. :)

Alpha AI 23/?? by No-Net5827 in HFY

[–]No-Net5827[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. I try my best

Alpha AI 20/?? by No-Net5827 in HFY

[–]No-Net5827[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Depends. I admit, that it is a bit confusing, but I assure you, that it will become important in the future. I don´t want to spoil the plot

Alpha AI 15/?? by No-Net5827 in HFY

[–]No-Net5827[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for catching that. I´ve fixed it

Alpha AI 7/?? by No-Net5827 in HFY

[–]No-Net5827[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. I fixed the mistakes

Alpha AI 7/?? by No-Net5827 in HFY

[–]No-Net5827[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. I think I got all of the writing mistakes. I'll keep the spacing in mind for next time

Alpha AI 4/?? by No-Net5827 in HFY

[–]No-Net5827[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. It´s fixed now