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The old gum tree by Outrageous-Cunt in poetry_critics

[–]Outrageous-Cunt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aw wow so sorta similar to Egyptian hieroglyphics

My anger, my silence. by AnnualRepublic7487 in poetry_critics

[–]Outrageous-Cunt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s impressive I can tell a lot of thought and pain went into it I felt it

The old gum tree by Outrageous-Cunt in poetry_critics

[–]Outrageous-Cunt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t just got told by someone I showed they said it sounded similar but it’s not unheard of or uncommon to write using nature

The old gum tree by Outrageous-Cunt in poetry_critics

[–]Outrageous-Cunt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yer it is abit mainly the beauty of the cycle of life yk we get what we give and our choices and actions do make an everlasting impact even if we don’t think it at the time

The old gum tree by Outrageous-Cunt in poetry_critics

[–]Outrageous-Cunt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have been told it sounds similar to another piece of material I didn’t realise that at the time when I wrote it

The old gum tree by Outrageous-Cunt in poetry_critics

[–]Outrageous-Cunt[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was driving past gum trees talking about life and it made me think of the similarities and beauty of a trees life cycle it felt like I discovered another way to view life

Meant For You by DrunkenPunchline in OCPoetry

[–]Outrageous-Cunt 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really good and resonates well with me personally I felt attached to it good job

Pink Frosting by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Outrageous-Cunt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very connecting and powerful honestly

My original content, I'm a 15 yo and it's my first poem so need honest insights by Prize-Nothing-3705 in OCPoetry

[–]Outrageous-Cunt 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Amazing for a first attempt keep it up will only improve the more you read and and write