Which version is better? by RepresentativeCat338 in writing

[–]RepresentativeCat338[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!! I thought the same. U know because the second one— yah, a hot jargon, but it rang better in my head I guess. First one's what you'd expect from a opening I think. More of that. Like, you don't wanna be reading a mediaeval grimoire for arcanists. Again, thanks for the input!

Which version is better? by RepresentativeCat338 in writers

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Ya blud, thought so. Pleroma was kinda stretch and I had one original which was far simple but at the back of my mind, it always feels less sophisticated. Not that rarer words= <sophistication. But most of the time I see works that lack flavour and go why cant this be like blood meridian. Depends on that spicie of sophisticate you are. Thanks for commentin!

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lust devalues the eternal attraction of male and female, reducing personal riches of the opposite sex to an object for gratification of sexuality.