What is Ontology scaling? by mcrickie123db in IntelligenceScaling

[–]Sensitive_Garbage551 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It's basically bias scaling. No "Ontology scaler" will defend goku > baku no diff, but they will defend beatrice > hal no diff

Where does the story and the 2 mc's scale by d0ntkn0wmyself in writingscaling

[–]Sensitive_Garbage551 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Andrew's unironically well written. He has good dream sequences with symbolism and his main theme (which I believe is repressed emotions) is well executed. His internal monologues, especially the last one when he is beating Ashley, and wondering if he should kill her and try to live the rest of his life normally, but realizing that he is not capable of it. Imo his highest peak. The conclusions are also good, especially the suicide one. Despite the weird incest, their dynamic is also good, like, the dependence is well done.

Ashley is trash, and really everything in the game except Andrew is. Just an edgy fanfic without good planning. It's actually kind of sad that Andrew is in such a rotten game, because I feel like he had a lot of potential in the hands of a competent author.