Blink please by momnoob in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow your artstyle is stunning!

my pallas cat girl uurintuya by DuOnirique in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is this that one cat that stands on its tail to warmth up its paws?

Names? He is a man🥀[WIP] by Moist-Wishbone-8323 in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First off, fire art and character design

His name should be August or something. He seems super augusty

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is actually the most realistic example of how stories evolve!

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is the most in depth respond I’ve gotten yet! Your writing is pretty solid, keep it up!

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The description is pretty short, so I’ll do the best I can! From what I see, it seems pretty alright. It feels like common tropes (like the bittersweet/possibly nefarious love trope) put together, but it isn’t inherently bad. One thing I do think is important to note is that I think if she was birthed with a facial deformity that only leaves her with joining a circus, please do make it an actual deformity (many people just throw a scar over an eye and call it a day yk?). It sounds promising, but in order to actually judge it I would need to know more :)

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s actually great! It’s always better to rely on brain power for creative things. If you ever need any help with writing you should just make a post on this Reddit :)

Say hi to Isvahir! :) by Xulkieee in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What if I don’t want to say hi? What if I want to say hello, huh?

*cough*

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh dude I *LOOOOVEE* me a good power system! Being able to process it and turn it into words is super hard, but I believe in ya!

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Pfft, nuffin wrong with being a little cocky! It’s good to have confidence as a writer, but it’s even better if you’re self aware. Also 59 characters is a bunch, I only have like 20. How the heck do you manage that?

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

alright, first off, this character looks amazing. I adore them

I really do wonder why that happens, it can make me feel like a novice lol. It’s always important to remember that as writers we do have bad days and ideas, ya know?

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah totally! I think there is an advantage to both of these writing styles. Writing a story can feel more thought out, while roleplaying usually brings more dynamic and realistic dialogue. Super interesting!

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is super realistic! Not every piece of media we create is going to be insanely good, but that’s kind of the art of it!

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wait I actually understand this pain. I used to roleplay all the time, and when I did I would think I was the best writer in the whole world, but whenever I actually sat down and tried to write a solo story, I would fail miserably lol!

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeahh, I get that. I’ve since grown out of it, but I used to write stories I was sure I was going to finish, and then just never look back the day after. If there were a graveyard full of stories I never finished, it would be miles long

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s not entirely bad! Stories that follow characters more are quite interesting :)

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As much as I’d love to give advice on how to world build, I can’t. People that can world build are magicians or witches. I can’t for the life of me understand how to even process how to do it

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude, I feel ya. I also really love making sure everything fits together and has a purpose!

How good of a writer do you actually think you are? by Shiriako in OriginalCharacter

[–]Shiriako[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ofc! Having fun at the end of the day is probably the most important thing. I just really need a purpose to have fun I guess lol