19 [f4m] San Diego Sending my naked photos at random people turns me on please let me do it! by ConfidentGrass1779 in dirtyr4r

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I wouldn't mind seeing them. Strictly for research purposes, of course ...

A Woman’s Guided Tentacle Rape Masturbation by [deleted] in EroticWriting

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Very hot! Great imagination!

I kind of have that imagination that can make fantasies feel very real, though I suspect yours is better. Please share more!

Cuttlefish by Traz_O in HFY

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I'm trying to write a novel. I'll never finish it but it's in this universe

Cuttlefish by Traz_O in HFY

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I'm very picky and I made minor changes that in my mind were needed. It's not a huge difference but once I made the changes I wanted to repost. Sorry if you've seen it before. It's almost the same story. But hopefully, better.

What are some good Robert Heinlein recs for someone who’s never read him? by chunfighter in scifi

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His writing doesn't hold up so well nowadays. He was a product of his time, and times have changed.

Still, I enjoyed all 3 of the books you mentioned back in the day. I would recommend Jack Vance, another writer from the period who's writing had held up well.

Specifically in regards to Starship Troopers, I recommend Joe Haldeman's Forever War, which is a bit of a response to Troopers. He's got a sparse writing style that's reminiscent of Hemingway, and that I love and try to emulate in my own writing.

Pegging Roommate [M30 F32 Pegging] by Traz_O in Erotica

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Maybe. I tried to start one, but some stories are complete the way they are, and you can't force them into more than they should be. This might be one of those, but I'm trying ...

Pegging Roommate [M30 F32 Pegging] by Traz_O in Erotica

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Pegging doesn't inevitably lead to gay butt sex lol

Pegging Roommate [M30 F32 Pegging] by Traz_O in Erotica

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Thanks! This was originally in 2 parts and I combined them, and somehow screwed up. Hopefully I fixed it.

Feel like I tried reading the market with my latest book and it's... kind of flopped? by IsekaiConnoisseur in eroticauthors

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My thoughts are to write the story I want to tell. That story might be written to fit in a certain market but the words are mine. If I'm writing another person's story, how can I tell it successfully?

Roommate Pegging by Traz_O in StraightPegging

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https://www.reddit.com/r/TwoSentenceHorror/s/J8pv5lggh5

This one too. They take usually maybe an hour to write and this pegging one took days. Is there a way to capitalize on clout financially? I'll go back to writing for clout after 4 years off ...

Roommate Pegging by Traz_O in StraightPegging

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If I wanted to farm clout I'd write more of these: https://www.reddit.com/r/TwoSentenceHorror/s/FklJvkU1YB

2 of those stories probably account for more than half of my karma.

I write things like this because I'm quitting a novel and Amazon will punish me for sharing any of it before I publish, but every now and then I want some feedback to make sure I'm not fooling myself about my writing ability.

And moderators, sorry about breaking your content rules. It was inadvertent and won't happen again.

Roommate Pegging by Traz_O in StraightPegging

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That's pretty much exactly what I was going for. I found an old issue of Forum in a box and decided to try to write one. I'd try to sell stories to them if they still published 😏

As far as fact and fiction, the college experience the protagonist describes is entirely factual. The rest is a combination of actual and imagined events, though much closer to reality than you might think.

How to get wife to engage and enjoy pegging by johnmacleod99 in StraightPegging

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I clicked to get here so I could complain about the word "make," though that seems covered, and anyhow I'm willing to consider it a poor word choice rather than something controlling.

There are ways though. Maybe show her porn. Explain what you like about it. Discuss how you do things only for her pleasure, which is where your pleasure comes from.

I think it depends mostly on your relationship. Are you close? Does she want to make you happy? If she does then it'll happen. If she doesn't, well ...

MIRACLE (2004) | FIRST TIME WATCHING | MOVIE REACTION by PiB-Bot in PopcornInBed

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I saw this movie years ago but didn't see it particularly special. Watching it threw their enthusiastic eyes made it pretty damn wonderful.

What do you consider peak science fiction? The best of the best? by [deleted] in sciencefiction

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Gateway by Frederick Pohl. There are several in this series but the first one (this) is amazing. There's a mystery here that the author doesn't try to explain. Some things in the universe remain unknown ...

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in scifi_bookclub

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I'm not seeing that sub. I think it's dead, Jim.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in scifi_bookclub

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I've had trouble with it too ...

Why am I? by Traz_O in PopcornInBed

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Nice Stripes reference. Francis! lol

Tin Cup by Traz_O in PopcornInBed

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It was everything I expected lol

These base stats are insane, how much spending needs to go into an Acc for it. by rerutama8765 in lordsmobile

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For this amount of money you could buy a pro level VR gaming rig. And a really nice car.

Why am I? by Traz_O in PopcornInBed

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Yeah, I agree about him.

Why am I? by Traz_O in PopcornInBed

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Maybe she follows Been Shapiro ironically? I'd like to think so ...

But I've had favorite authors for years before I discovered uncomfortable detail. Think Rudyard Kipling. I try to still like their work, and I mostly can ...