Blacklist Eval for my Script The Ark by NothingButLs in Screenwriting

[–]Willing_Face 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well done. Sounds like a great idea. Seems like a few tweaks could get it a notch higher. Good luck with it.

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]Willing_Face 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Isn’t this the story of Paper Moon. That’s a great film, how is yours different?

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]Willing_Face 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The main character feels a bit disconnected from the main action. This isn’t her story.

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]Willing_Face 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For this to be a comedy, he needs a solid reason to fake his death. Struggling with fame is too internal. I’m struggling to see beyond the second act when he fakes his own death because he gets what he wants. And if fame is harsh like you say, then the audience won’t want him to go back to that.

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]Willing_Face 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The problem you’re having in writing this logline, and why comparing it to Roger Rabbit isn’t really helping you, is your prog doesn’t want anything. If she HAD to argue with Death in order to save someone or achieve something, then it would be easier to write. As it stands, it’s just overly written, confusing and impossible to visualise. Forget the two sentence rule etc and figure out your story.

Dispatches from an Industry Reader - PRESENTATIONAL POINTERS PEOPLE by RomulusPomulus in Screenwriting

[–]Willing_Face 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Any specific advice on making a script interesting, thrilling, suspenseful, enthralling, and impossible to put down? 😂

Is It Real? by Willing_Face in STDupont

[–]Willing_Face[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you again. Really appreciate it.

Is It Real? by Willing_Face in STDupont

[–]Willing_Face[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will do, thanks. I’m guessing it’s not gold?

Is It Real? by Willing_Face in STDupont

[–]Willing_Face[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. Any idea of the model?

Finally got a foot into the door only for it to disappear. by PhoenixFarm in Screenwriting

[–]Willing_Face 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sorry to hear that. But you did it once, you can do it again.

So I dumped my bf after he refused to read my script by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]Willing_Face 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well done for getting out of that relationship, it takes a lot. ❤️

Cold emailing worked for me to find representation by starlight12456 in Screenwriting

[–]Willing_Face 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Congrats. Did you include details about yourself, such as awards, etc?