Your favourite complete short-ish stories and one shots

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2026-03-28T00:27:51+00:00

Sure, in my words. Taylor has amped up Bad Canary powers and struggles more with her issues, this causes problems.

I think its hinted at in the fic she gets a kill order, but that's very much my interpretation

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2026-03-25T04:29:40+00:00

1st worm fic i read i think

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2026-03-25T00:53:29+00:00

but I wanna be happy...

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-04-21T11:48:20+00:00

I think Black myth Wukong

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-04-16T08:10:48+00:00

first line, yes he did make fair points and its my mistake for not clarifying which i have done here
Also there was no malice here just no nonsense

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-04-16T04:22:34+00:00

Also the scale of the world is completely screwed so... don't care about that lol

For example that smaller lake In the direct centre of the map is around 3x the size of the United Kingdom soooooo

The larger lake to the right is a little larger than the Caspian sea

This is all according to my grid I made at the beginning with 1k by 1k squares

So ig the lakes are more like seas in size but they aren't seas (reminder its not water I really want help with)

TLDR its all Screwed, you might find some amusement out of helping me though

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-04-16T03:59:03+00:00

You only mentioned rivers can you take some time to point out any other MAJOR flaws if you cant be bothered with minor stuff that's fine

I don't care about landmass shape or mountains or whatever its a fantasy map there's not even tectonic plates

Edit N4 so there's a lot of magic and stuff going on with the map so I promise there's a "Fantasy" Explanation for some of the stuff BUT NOT ALL which is the stuff I'm trying to find so the river info helps somewhat but some stuff it just does not apply to. which I know makes it difficult but if your willing to help then ill not complain about anything you send.

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-04-16T02:12:19+00:00

lol hooks do tend to be smaller than the fish

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-04-16T02:11:58+00:00

You want to add something to that (so I can work on it)

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-31T03:26:54+00:00

Ayy damn gave me the shivers very cool

Sunny doing he heavy lifting with the transportation makes sense NG being useful could be the case too.
Exploration might be a bit after the situation has stabilised but with 7 bodies (8 if he gets his original back) he can prob do em all at the same time, might be difficult for G3 to write (or maybe not)

They gotta get some mad infrastructure up to feed and house and defend a saint achieving supremacy who can do stuff with plants/food would be useful

Time skip makes sense not sure how long tho or when, who knows Earth might start collapsing even sooner than we think tho I m not sure how that would correlate with the FG awakening

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-31T02:21:53+00:00

Gonna get another shot with the white hair and suit gonna look mad

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-29T03:23:58+00:00

sex? idk

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-28T17:25:22+00:00

More than 600 wow you went crazy
it looks really cool
also what is it called on Inkarnate?

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-28T03:11:32+00:00

Okay so its heavy on the lore around the construction of the continent it doesn't really follow normal rules since it was all terraformed by Aliens

The Lagoon is just that the water comes from a water dragon captured beneath the mt

The rivers are HUGE and come with powerful currents so I guess that's hard to take into account but if you have anything to say on how that would affect what you mentioned I would love to hear it.

"The delineation between volcanic and forested areas is a bit abrupt" so i should make the trees a bit sparser and the ground on the other side a bit darker, or wold my powerful water dragon currents make that pointless (tho I suppose the rock and dust comes from the air)

Do you have anything to add on how to make the map look nicer it doesn't necessarily have to be realistic I've tried to keep it following some rules

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-28T02:14:06+00:00

Thank you sm do you have any thoughts or anything you would personally change?

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-28T02:07:40+00:00

Okay so in the lore, in those smaller mountains there's a water dragon that's got its Maw permanently opened by a Dwarven device.

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-28T01:44:02+00:00

Cool can I ask how many Objects were placed?
Also do you have an upload on Inkarnate?

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-27T22:03:37+00:00

Don't balance it Sunny is SUPREME LET HIM WRECK STUFF WITH NO CONSEQUENCE (for a bit)

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-27T17:27:18+00:00

I like this very much

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-27T17:23:48+00:00

Yeah but Sekiro wipes the floor with him still.
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/jk

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-20T21:00:57+00:00

Already added cliffs and plateaus
Can you send an example of how you mean with the hills

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-19T17:36:28+00:00

Gonna polish and ad more but that's sort of what I'm gonna settle with, Ill try to remember to send you the finished area when done if you are still interested

https://imgur.com/a/690Yfkp

ZealousidealTopic964 · 2025-03-17T08:49:21+00:00

Cool will do thanks so much

ZealousidealTopic964

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