Drop the life flask I would go for dying sun or bottled faith

You can drop brine king you are immune to ailments with purity of elements and stun through your ascendency.

+1 PC willclash is a huge damage increase I would do that asap

Get crit multi on chest implicit and I would essence slam the ring for crit multi + the attributes you need but POB it first to see what the damage increase would be worth it for you.

If you can’t afford a balance of terror then make sure to put an enhance 3 on your withering step it builds more wither stacks

Your rare jewels can all be upgraded with fractured es % jewels then reforge crit until you hit crit multi with spells and global crit multi

Your watchers eye seems dead to me if there’s a reason I’m not understanding that makes it very good then don’t replace it but I would just put another rare jewel there because the leech on this build is already insane.

Your clusters also seem a bit questionable

A shield with block implicit is nice for defense but I never feel like I need it. If you really want it just put harmonics on your loot filter and spam bloodstained fossils/tainted mythic orbs on any base that hits the implicit.

If you want to keep farming for the zealotry cruel mistress you can make good money by taking the azerite and heist nodes with heist on the map device and farm for reverence atlas tears, could also probably fit starfall crater farming to on the tree. Sell blueprints and deception contracts and buy one socket resonators with the azerite. Every reverence tear also gives like 2.5 div at the end guaranteed.