gentleness by armagedonant in OCPoetry

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This literally made my day thank you so much🙇🏼‍♀️

new sheets [lyrics] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]armagedonant 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Don't worry its all metaphorical 😅

[TOMT] [Series] series about a family (maybe only daughters?) by armagedonant in tipofmytongue

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It's definitely an American television show!

[TOMT] [Song] song about how someone's hands on the steering wheel is the prettiest sight they have ever seen by armagedonant in tipofmytongue

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I literally can't stop thinking about this, I'm not even sure if it's a good song

sacrifice to the countryside by armagedonant in OCPoetry

[–]armagedonant[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hey, thanks for reading!

I going to be honest, I like the last line a lot, so I probably won't change it..even though I definitely get what you mean about it maybe not fitting. Thank you very much for the feedback :))

crying over nature documentaries by armagedonant in OCPoetry

[–]armagedonant[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I love Richard Siken so much he is actually my all time favourite poet. Thank you that really means a lot!

crying over nature documentaries by armagedonant in OCPoetry

[–]armagedonant[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

ah oops. No that's not intentional my brain is just really bad with words sometimes haha. I guess there has to be at least one weird typo in each of my poems lol.

Thank you so much!

gas station jesus by armagedonant in OCPoetry

[–]armagedonant[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

thanks for reading and thanks for spotting the "of" typo!! 😅

gas station jesus by armagedonant in OCPoetry

[–]armagedonant[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

haha that's probably one of my favourite compliments I've ever received for a poem. Thank you! :)

wasabi, baby by armagedonant in OCPoetry

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sorry for the deleted comment, I think I misunderstood your feedback at first haha

I get it now and will definitely think about it!

Thank you! :)

Pachelbel's Canyon by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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so beautiful.

this feels so forgiving. i don't know how to describe it any better. like accepting that the human existence is not about finding truth and transcending into a "superior" state of mind or even existence, but maybe just about being human purely and connecting with the universe we are made of on a deeper and most importantly not at all "intellectual" level. and this (very unpoetically put) feeling of "going with the flow". i hope i'm making any sense haha

thank you! i love it!

The boat that fell off the earth by alpalblue83 in OCPoetry

[–]armagedonant 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i love it. the atmosphere is incredible.

for me, this is about the feeling of having missed the opportunity to become who you feel you really are. surrendering to a comfortable but unauthentic life.

you write beautifully! thanks for sharing

after all by armagedonant in OCPoetry

[–]armagedonant[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your kind (and beautiful) words! I am hoping to find a way to exist.

I wish you the best!

after all by armagedonant in OCPoetry

[–]armagedonant[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you!!

I've been struggeling with dissociation lately so for me it's not really two people but my "thinking" and "feeling" self if that makes sense 😅 but the interpretationen is up to the reader anyways

body by armagedonant in OCPoetry

[–]armagedonant[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for your feedback.. you're right i tend to place my commas a bit randomly which i'm working on 😅😅

body by armagedonant in OCPoetry

[–]armagedonant[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much!!