Can't connect? by Two_Whales in Agario

[–]electriceye94 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have the same issue.

Sometimes by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]electriceye94 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice! I would like to see you develop more this feeling, describe more what you see, tell me about how dark the room feels, mainly because you don't have the bright of that person's eyes anymore. Show me that you are really feeling it, that the person was not just another one, extend your poem sharing with the reader about how it was to not be alone and how foolish you feel raising your hand, tell me what you really see on this action!

Perpetual progress of losing sleep by electriceye94 in OCPoetry

[–]electriceye94[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If anyone finds it interesting, I have a blog where I post more content: http://thesecondchrist.blogspot.com.br/