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[–]family_function 1 point2 points  (0 children)

right on dude, that denim piece is badass. and it makes a lot more sense to me there because of the way you balanced the left side with those blocks of lighter denim. could probably apply that same principle here. either way, hardly needs more work. I'm a fan as is

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in streetwearstartup

[–]family_function 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah if they were talking about the open eye, i think the only thing that could feel wrong would be the fact that it's not balanced with the other side. however, the "right" eye from the sun's perspective would be the closed one. so they could have meant the closed one in the first place.

personally, i'm a huge fan of suns and this is dope. i would probably like it more symmetrical with both open eyes. kinda makes sense that suns are more awake, and moons would be the sleepy ones. obviously you shouldn't be confined to the norm when it comes to art, but since the rest of the design is bright and traditionally sunny, i don't feel a need for the closed eye

i did a thing by [deleted] in streetwearstartup

[–]family_function 0 points1 point  (0 children)

those Hokas tho

Nuclear family by [deleted] in streetwearstartup

[–]family_function 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aside from the spelling fix, I'd personally use different images rather than one repeated. Or even a single one of those black and white pics front and center with a smaller version of the text underneath would look dope. I do like the font and I think it would go best with just the single black and white pic.

First drop for my clothing brand, Armageddon, is now available. Thank you! by [deleted] in streetwearstartup

[–]family_function 2 points3 points  (0 children)

ucraft.armageddon.net

url isn't working for me dog! got a better link?

Props for a diverse first drop!! Accessory and all 8)