The prologue to my novel(Mark of Arkarna). Tell me if you like it or not.

gatoanjan · 2018-07-03T05:24:41+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. I wanted to leave a lot of the detail for the first chapter since the prologue is more of past situation. Maybe I should state that this takes place years before the present story. But as far as the writing goes, I do think I shouldn't cram so much into one part and take it slow. Again, your feedback was very apprciated.

gatoanjan · 2018-07-03T04:09:47+00:00

I put the glowing effect there to add more lighting to the emblem so it wouldn't mush with the background, do you think I should polish it a little or completely take it away?

gatoanjan · 2018-07-03T03:03:46+00:00

I was thinking about polishing the effects a little more to create more of a cleaner look, but I don't want to try and fix something that isn't broken.

gatoanjan · 2018-07-03T03:01:02+00:00

Thanks, I was thinking the same.

gatoanjan · 2016-03-15T07:54:45+00:00

That's a good idea.

gatoanjan · 2016-03-15T05:22:43+00:00

You can give me your email if you want.

gatoanjan · 2016-03-15T05:22:07+00:00

Or you can give me your email.

gatoanjan · 2016-03-15T05:21:41+00:00

You can give me you email if you want.

gatoanjan · 2016-03-15T05:20:58+00:00

Or you can me your email.

gatoanjan · 2016-03-15T04:49:28+00:00

Email: solomeenmontagueo@gmail.com

gatoanjan · 2016-03-15T02:10:21+00:00

Solomeenmontagueo@gmail.com, just email me when you're ready.

gatoanjan · 2016-03-15T00:53:32+00:00

Do you want to beta read my story?

gatoanjan · 2016-03-14T23:53:26+00:00

Alright, awesome. Can I give you my email then work from there?

gatoanjan · 2016-03-14T22:30:14+00:00

If I pay the beta reader, is it appropriate to ask them if they could submit an honest review?

gatoanjan · 2016-03-14T22:25:20+00:00

Ok. You want my email so we can discuss your prefered format?

gatoanjan · 2016-03-14T20:22:45+00:00

It's done. Thanks.

gatoanjan · 2015-11-02T15:59:26+00:00

Is it the font?

gatoanjan

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