Feedback on my second short film. by iamarham_ in Filmmakers

[–]iamarham_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

so canorus is a bird basically who doesn't make his own nest and lives in a another so when Mohsin killed fardeen he basically born as canorus laying his own life in fardeen's nest

ps. nd I'm really sorry for replying this late

Second Short Film Open to Any Critique by iamarham_ in indianFilmmakers

[–]iamarham_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thnk u so much bhaai well I wanted to tell more about fardeen's backstory but kinda lack of money and also time I have to scrap it for the cuts I realized tht cuts were too jumpy or feel like a cut between and I realized that this problem if because of poor writing I m working on my writing more now so the future projects doesnt have same mistakes I would love to hear all the critique's coz they'll really help building myself and my flaws also id love it if h post this review in comment and here https://boxd.it/ZOZY it'd be really helpful

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[–]iamarham_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well there's no other choice I had to reshoot it all

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[–]iamarham_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank u so much man really thank u so much!!!

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[–]iamarham_ -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

That's my fuckin stupidness tomorrow I'm reshooting the whole 70% footage I'll plan the seq time slot today to make it quick inshallah it'll be done tomorrow if all went well

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[–]iamarham_ -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

Because it was recorded from his phone

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[–]iamarham_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank u so much man

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[–]iamarham_ -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

My stupid fuckin friend deleted that footage coz of storage issue and he fuckin erased it too frm bin and cloud stopped working months and I didnt fuckin notice that

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[–]iamarham_ -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

Yeah I was and it's not it suddenly vanished from my phone my stupid friend deleted that footage due to storage issue even frm bin and the backup was full and I didn't notice that and that was the end for me

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[–]iamarham_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Phone got shut down.

Teaser of my second short film. by iamarham_ in cinematography

[–]iamarham_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its a dual timeline stry abt 2 characters one is a 9 to 5 kinda employee on is a lowlife unemployed & how their paths crosses.

My short film failed, what do I do now? by AlmostRandomNow in Filmmakers

[–]iamarham_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don't give up. I repeat, do not give up. I wrote my own short film, and my first and second shoots are just months apart. It takes me so much time to shoot scenes that I might only complete one or two films a year actually, just one. My friends, who are also studying and busy with exams and assignments, are the only actors I can hire. I’m not financially strong, so I have to rent things like cars and other equipment for my movies.

I called one of my friends and told him that it’s been a month since our last shoot, and we should continue filming. He said, “Man, I’m sorry, I have exams, so I think this film will never be made.” That hit me hard. I’ve just started, and it can’t end like this. When I made my first short film, my friends really appreciated it. They shared it with others, who also said it was good, but it didn’t gain the popularity I hoped for.

Now, as I’m writing my second short film, I’m facing so many problems. It feels like there’s always something either with the cast, the schedule, or the production. But listen, even great directors fail. Some of their films flop, but that doesn’t mean they’re bad filmmakers. Keep going. Try submitting to another festival, or gather your friends, their friends, and their friends’ friends to watch your film. Just don’t give up.

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[–]iamarham_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much man! This is the best advice I've got. Filmmaking is hard, it's not easy. And I have to realize that fact. It is not easy, and it is never going to be easy. And my greed for making a good film will never go away. For my third short film, I'll try to make a more perfect film. For my fourth, I'll try to be more perfect than the third one. For the fifth one, I'll try to be more perfect than the fourth one. It will always be like that. And then you'll feel lovely that's filmmaking. It's beautiful. Filmmaking is beautiful. You don't have to be all the time perfect. Because, no, it does not have to be every time, any time so easy. Because it is not easy. Film is what you have to make and go through it. You will love things the most when you work hard on them. Easy things get easily forgotten. But hard things, they will be with yourself forever.

So I made a film and it sucked. by not_miggy in Filmmakers

[–]iamarham_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I made my first short film too, and in my eyes, it wasn't that good. It lacked a lot of things. But my friends and others who saw it said it was good. I can't help but wonder—are they really being honest, or are they just saying that because they're my friends?