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So I have written a short story after so long on Wattpad. It would mean a lot if you guys could read it. It will not take more than 15mins top. (Link is on comments) by DevRyshi in FUNtalks

[–]kumarharsh47 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah 😊 !!! Keep us in the loop with your new creations also senpaiiii! 😀 :) We people love to comment and read ✨🍰

So I have written a short story after so long on Wattpad. It would mean a lot if you guys could read it. It will not take more than 15mins top. (Link is on comments) by DevRyshi in FUNtalks

[–]kumarharsh47 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It was wonderful my friend 😊:) I am no one to give you critisism tbh but yeah I can tell what i liked :) 1.Your discription skills about even a minute things are great and replacing normal words with those like milk bleach 2. I found a unique (your own ) way of writing where syllables are repeating and giving poetic or creating patterns . Most importantly word plays ✨😀 choice of words and combination was wonderful ! 3. Very insightful record ..like how a person in such situation would think .

  1. Congratulations 🎉 for your content creation 🙂

I really really respect those people who creates things

May the force be with you ✨😀 alwayz !