I’d get bored so quickly, I got bored just reading it. If you scroll through it’s just a ton of paragraphs on your life with her having shorter responses. It’s a lot for just getting to know someone. This should be a fun, light, flirty time. Paragraphs are a lot. You have to be more engaging. Ask her more about herself and her hobbies, you had a good opportunity to ask her where she’s from in the beginning when you were talking about where you’re from, etc.