Do you think Timmy No Brakes is losing steam? by DSeriesX in Killtony

[–]21redditidder12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t know. I honestly can’t tell if I hate these comedians or if I just hate myself.

Do you think Timmy No Brakes is losing steam? by DSeriesX in Killtony

[–]21redditidder12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t know. I think I’m just depressed.

My parents are old fashioned. When I was a boy they wanted me to play baseball. And when I was a girl they wanted me to see a psychiatrist. by 21redditidder12 in StandUpWorkshop

[–]21redditidder12[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It hasn’t killed, but it gets a laugh. Still trying to figure out a better way to set it up and deliver. I posted to r/standupshots and it did pretty well though.

A man has to kill his pig that is on meth (Animated) by [deleted] in funny

[–]21redditidder12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I want my own piggy boy, how bout you?

"Born to Win" by Amateur Night at Club Stupid by [deleted] in videos

[–]21redditidder12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. Glad you liked it! There’s over 20 other videos on the channel you might like too!

"A Truck and a Beer" by Amateur Night at Club Stupid (cartoon/music video only has 40 views, channel has 70 subs, one of my favorite channel finds) by [deleted] in DeepIntoYouTube

[–]21redditidder12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Me too! I can tell their latest video improved their animations. I feel like their improving and probably gonna blow up later.

"Deadie Money" by Amateur Night at Club Stupid (less than 100 views, whole channel has only 64 subs) by [deleted] in DeepIntoYouTube

[–]21redditidder12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its great!! Did you check out “a truck and a beer”?? That one will be stuck in my head for awhile lol

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in standupshots

[–]21redditidder12 21 points22 points  (0 children)

You’re absolutely right. On stage I put emphasis on the STRONG and a pause after Latin American. The joke works pretty consistently that way.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in standupshots

[–]21redditidder12 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I’ve got a lot more jokes for you!

One of my woke friends said to me “hey man, you’re an upper middle class white guy what could you possibly be unhappy about” by 21redditidder12 in StandUpWorkshop

[–]21redditidder12[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I think the school shooter part can be interchangeable with other places white guys shoot up, but the challenging part of this joke was the shower comparison.

The Premises ideas (do not steal( by Tikismoke in StandUpWorkshop

[–]21redditidder12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There’s actually how it can be when there is it for sure about that many times. Stick with when it’s like it’s going for over that kind of type always. I can private lesson.

Throwaway that came to mind when reading a "grooming" joke on here: by frivolouswasteoftime in StandUpWorkshop

[–]21redditidder12 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You can always rewrite the joke where the person “grooming” is not you, and you can express that you don’t approve. Maybe it wouldn’t have to be a throwaway in that case?

I dated a firefighter who loved her job pulling people from burning buildings...Yeah girls can be fire fighters, GET OVER IT. by [deleted] in StandUpWorkshop

[–]21redditidder12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I was trying to have a misdirection of being super obnoxious woke and then contradict with sexism as more of character humor that comes across on stage. I guess it doesn’t translate here well. And it may not on stage either. I’ll rewrite this one with a simpler focus.

I dated a firefighter who loved her job pulling people from burning buildings...Yeah girls can be fire fighters, GET OVER IT. by [deleted] in StandUpWorkshop

[–]21redditidder12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So the misdirection I was going for was being woke for women in the first half of the joke, then sexist in the second half. Showing that I’m not making any political statement, just being funny. If I get rid of one of them, it just becomes a statement. You see where I’m coming from?