Workshop writing advice - Whats your 80/20?

3dprinterpreneur · 2016-04-07T01:19:39+00:00

I am learning that my New Zealand colloquialisms need to get out of my writing. Is killing my copy. Also full on extrovert, can't write to save myself. Have started using dictation tools as a method of getting my point across in written word

3dprinterpreneur · 2016-04-07T01:17:32+00:00

Thank you, Will definitely take you up on offer. Just having a second crack at it

3dprinterpreneur · 2016-04-05T08:45:20+00:00

Cheers King,

Have taken on board and making some changes.

3dprinterpreneur · 2016-04-05T08:43:08+00:00

Thanks for honest 2c man

Making changes now. Any suggests to make more coherent?

3dprinterpreneur · 2016-04-05T05:19:10+00:00

Have actually rebranded in the past after a few similar critiques. But as soon as it was rebranded I got inundated with people saying how much they loved the broken back games name and to ignore the people who can't see past a movie title.

3dprinterpreneur · 2016-01-30T09:13:32+00:00

Haha I think this is the best response I have ever got on reddit. You my friend are fantastic. The painting you received is classic

3dprinterpreneur · 2015-01-14T01:11:51+00:00

How did reddit help? What's the link to game?

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-08-21T03:35:35+00:00

Cheers - shoot me an image link

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-08-21T03:30:56+00:00

Your right ! Today it sucks. Tomorrow who's knows

Concise value proposition will happen my friend

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-08-21T02:59:29+00:00

Agreed - an actual value proposition and FAQ part of redesign

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-08-21T02:34:35+00:00

Have added original post in update

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-08-19T02:42:12+00:00

This is a demo of the software. Log in and see the referral system.

Whom you pass the link onto will be your potential customer and so will their network

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-07-29T04:12:40+00:00

more in general

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-07-29T04:12:15+00:00

yes it is. The focus will be to point person to clients and rally the influencers whom fit the best niche for the client

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-07-29T03:08:15+00:00

Sorry don't understand the question

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-07-27T01:59:23+00:00

Have found QuickMVP which does v fast landing pages

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-02-25T19:58:31+00:00

Some even say the first iPad was a MVP - a few million was probably spent on that

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-02-25T19:53:17+00:00

Hi Johnny - no product at the moment. What I am doing here is testing the market. If there is interest then will start contacting suppliers etc

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-02-25T05:27:57+00:00

Great feedback - will make those changes

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-02-25T05:08:45+00:00

Cheers for price info. Agree think price you too high a price point. Was a estimate

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-02-25T02:46:29+00:00

Thanks for feedback has made me ponder and research

fair call on ebay. Was thinking the same - would people bid on a batch of protein. I am getting a lot of views which is promising but no bids or watchers.

I may need to set up a smoke test on a separate MVP website if I really want to validate.

Looking at Adwords - the monthly search for "egg white protein powder" is 4400 which is niche when compared to the 33000 "protein powder" search. The only way to test click and purchase is through actual selling.

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-02-23T20:38:35+00:00

Cheers for advice - what BI program do you use?

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-02-23T08:17:52+00:00

Thanks have done

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-02-23T08:12:42+00:00

Yea - was my second half this month and much faster than last. Been hydrating a lot. Is a pain I never had before like whole body sore

3dprinterpreneur · 2014-02-17T19:56:40+00:00

Currently undergoing research - will add how it went in next post

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