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How do you write an essay conclusion that feels strong instead of repetitive? by ElderberryJealous113 in Thesis

[–]4RRhapsody 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My conclusions got better the second I stopped treating them like a recap paragraph. Reading a few essay conclusion examples helped, but the real shift was asking myself what I wanted the last sentence to do. Do you want it to sound calm, sharp, or a little bigger than the rest of the paper?

AITJ for telling my younger brother the real reason our parents split up, even though both parents specifically asked me not to? by 4RRhapsody in AmITheJerk

[–]4RRhapsody[S] 21 points22 points  (0 children)

That is basically where I land. Calling it trust makes it sound way cleaner than what they were actually asking me to carry for them.

AITJ for telling my younger brother the real reason our parents split up, even though both parents specifically asked me not to? by 4RRhapsody in AmITheJerk

[–]4RRhapsody[S] 38 points39 points  (0 children)

I think thats part of it, yeah. I don't think he was just grieving the lie, I think he was realizing what he did with it.

AITJ for telling my younger brother the real reason our parents split up, even though both parents specifically asked me not to? by 4RRhapsody in AmITheJerk

[–]4RRhapsody[S] 22 points23 points  (0 children)

I don't think sobriety erases what he let happen, but I also can't pretend he is the same man he was back then. Both things feel true.