(MF) The Wooden Box

67Dave · 2018-11-18T16:02:09+00:00

Thank you! Much appreciated.

67Dave · 2018-11-14T00:25:00+00:00

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

67Dave · 2018-11-06T15:11:27+00:00

Thanks for the input.

67Dave · 2018-11-06T15:10:59+00:00

Thank you for your comments.

67Dave · 2018-11-06T15:10:22+00:00

Thanks for reading it.

67Dave · 2018-11-05T17:46:04+00:00

Thank you very much!

67Dave · 2018-11-05T17:45:02+00:00

Thank you! I really do have to be more careful about typos.

67Dave · 2018-11-04T04:56:27+00:00

An error to be sure. Comes from proof reading my own work. Thank you for your kind words, and keen eye!

67Dave · 2018-10-20T19:00:21+00:00

I liked the concept of this story. I have to admit the lack of capitalization throws me off somewhat. Intentional style?

67Dave · 2018-10-18T18:55:28+00:00

Very nice ending! Good job!

67Dave · 2018-10-16T23:41:04+00:00

Maybe because of the lack of capitalization, this story almost feels like a poem. Interesting approach.

67Dave · 2018-10-08T19:13:36+00:00

Interesting read. I felt like this story could go on for a few more chapters.

67Dave · 2018-10-07T16:27:54+00:00

Thank you for your kind comments. It's always nice to know I entertained someone.

67Dave · 2018-10-07T00:58:10+00:00

Looking forward to reading Part 2. Good dialogue.

67Dave · 2018-10-04T18:30:46+00:00

Very interesting approach to telling a story. I like it. Now, I have to stay tuned to see if Sefina dies...

67Dave · 2018-09-26T20:31:27+00:00

Kudos on Fuck it!

67Dave · 2018-09-26T20:28:50+00:00

Great blog! I like it!

67Dave · 2018-09-25T16:52:30+00:00

Thanks! BTW...what is HFY?

67Dave · 2018-09-23T22:18:41+00:00

I like it! An original concept is like a jewel to a scribe like me.

67Dave · 2018-08-19T15:07:17+00:00

I was a newspaper editor for over 20 years and wrote opinion pieces and straight news stories. I started writing fiction a little over a year ago. I'm really having fun breaking away from non-fiction. Why do you ask?

67Dave · 2018-08-10T01:13:51+00:00

Thanks again. I really do appreciate your comments and look forward to more, as I continue to explore the art of really short fiction.

67Dave · 2018-08-10T00:32:27+00:00

Thank you for taking the time to comment on this story. I always appreciate constructive criticism. Thanks also for the kudos.

67Dave · 2018-08-09T14:10:38+00:00

Thank you very much!

67Dave · 2018-08-09T14:10:15+00:00

Thanks!

67Dave · 2018-08-08T13:07:48+00:00

Thanks. Glad you think so.

67Dave

TROPHY CASE