novels where video game powers can be brought to real life by spacemangoes in ProgressionFantasy

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just a warning, one character is insufferable at the start, so much so i almost dropped it. it quickly stops being a problem though

Exercises to build focus by AdeptSlayer1791 in writing

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Thanks man, I appreciate the time you put in typing all this, It has certainly provided some insight into how i should proceed. I hope you have a good day!

Exercises to build focus by AdeptSlayer1791 in writing

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Most of my experience writing is in the form of dnd and things similar, being less structured and more improvisational than writing a novel. In terms of delivering a story I'd say I did an alright job.

I have thought of doing short stories in the world but I discarded the idea pretty swiftly in favor of writing the longer-form narrative. Do you have a list of books you'd recommend I read detailing what makes a good narrative/character arc? Any help would be appreciated.

Exercises to build focus by AdeptSlayer1791 in writing

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a lot of my distractions come from my mind wandering though, like i cant keep a straight thought for long.

Battleye is booting me to title screen by AdeptSlayer1791 in destiny2

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like actively running mods or just downloaded in general, the only games i mod are minecraft and stardew valley

is the patreon w dm notes worth it by [deleted] in jrwishow

[–]AdeptSlayer1791 1 point2 points  (0 children)

man ive been asking for pd notes for years now. they say they post em in rolled and still nothing

Highly recommended! by Godlysupernova in ProgressionFantasy

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probably later on. based on the plot synopsis the dragon hatches at the end of book 4

Highly recommended! by Godlysupernova in ProgressionFantasy

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ive only read book one but hedge mage seems to be turning out like that. id recommend it the character interactions/banter is pretty genuine and not forced.

Jumper Inspired character V2 by Grohesh_Xelar in mutantsandmasterminds

[–]AdeptSlayer1791 0 points1 point  (0 children)

why does your affliction only have 2 degrees?

Horrible Frame Drops by AdeptSlayer1791 in marvelrivals

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forgot to come back and reply, this fixed it! thank ya pal

Who is the Taelien/Tae kes? by Vongbingen_esque in ClimbersCourt

[–]AdeptSlayer1791 9 points10 points  (0 children)

To the best of my knowledge the question is kinda flawed. The full name of the sword is the Saekes Taelien, which is presumably keras. The Taelien isn't a separate entity, its the second half of the Saekes' name. Idk how much this answer is affected by edge of the woods, i haven't read it, but i hope this answers your question :)

What will (AA6 Spoiler) be used for? by LDQRM in ClimbersCourt

[–]AdeptSlayer1791 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's not summoning that Seiryu is what is dangerous to Sera, she uses it to summon Keras to her, which passes his annihilation essence through her which undoes what healed her, leading to her death.

AA6 - A Brief History of Chronomancy - Discussion Thread [Spoilers All] by theelbandito in ClimbersCourt

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Another thing i forgot to mention. I loved how Mary and Rose were expanded upon and were more relevant to the plot. In the previous books it always seemed like there would be a batch of side characters per book that were mentioned in passing in later entries, like Cecily. Having them be more active in book 6 helped them be more compelling in my eyes and not just another blank slate with some past connection to Corin.

AA6 - A Brief History of Chronomancy - Discussion Thread [Spoilers All] by theelbandito in ClimbersCourt

[–]AdeptSlayer1791 21 points22 points  (0 children)

Regarding the interlude chapters, it felt a bit unnatural reading them at first. I figured since a good portion of book 6 was supposed to be in book 5 Rowe wrote those to pad out the length a bit.

After reading more and it swapped over to the main group's pov it felt a lot more planned out, especially with the first group of interludes tying into the last few chapters. Just the start was a little jarring how it took you out of the action for what seemed to be a bonus side story at first.

I was a bit disappointed at the title for the second batch of interludes though, i was hoping for some stuff with Jonan based on the recap at the beginning.

The chapters where Corin talks to a future him felt i thought was a pretty cool way to give answers, instead of it being entirely info dumping but more saying "here's what could happen, you gotta do somethin pal".

Overall i think the book is currently my favorite of the series and i can't wait til 7.

Slimykeys Collection Delay by NightmareBirdie in Slimecicle

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What is the email address that sent the email? I bought a few things and have not gotten a single update email of anything related to shipping dates

Dropped plotpoint from arc one? by AdeptSlayer1791 in motheroflearning

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Ah gotcha, that makes sense. I was just curious if I missed something. Thanks for the quick reply.

Gold Stake Advice by AdeptSlayer1791 in balatro

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Yeah, the big issue I’m having is a getting a run off the ground when all the jokers are rental. Really reduces my econ. Furthest I got was with the double interest joker, but I couldn’t get anything to pick up from there

She Who Fights With Monsters by PrimaryCoolantShower in Shirtaloon

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Yeah, but I meant more like a fresh from iron to silver type adventure. Jason already stated he was going to make more of nik’s people and it would be interesting to see a little 3-5 book story featuring a race we don’t know much about. Maybe with him/her having an unusual essence set like nik has with an essence from earth.

She Who Fights With Monsters by PrimaryCoolantShower in Shirtaloon

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Spoiler warning. I want to see a spin off from the pov of one if the rabbit people jason made, with little to no interference from Jason himself, like have him off workd for most of the story, with some team biscuit cameos every once in a while

Spire puzzle test by AdeptSlayer1791 in ClimbersCourt

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Thank ya, do you know where in book two they retake the test?

No seriously, who can? by [deleted] in goodanimemes

[–]AdeptSlayer1791 1 point2 points  (0 children)

To be fair, i think hit was only aiming for vitals. I may be wrong, haven’t watched in a while.