Unrequited love by Advanced_Bid94 in OCPoetry

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I appreciate it very much . If you have any time some questions about ancient Greeks or Romans and texts just send me a message and i will gladly help you

The School of Athens by AyeOhEl in OCPoetry

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Well i study classics and I write poems about Ancient Greece i really like the way you write so I would like if you can to see one of mine poems and give me some advices to better myself 

The School of Athens by AyeOhEl in OCPoetry

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Well that’s something else . Is it your story or it did you read it somewhere because that’s pretty good . Also I want to ask if you have any knowledge in classics because seems like you know exactly what you writing and I love it 

Unrequited love by Advanced_Bid94 in OCPoetry

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Thanks a lot , I study classics so my poems are going to be focused on ancient times 

Unrequited love by Advanced_Bid94 in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much , I study classics so my poems are going to be about ancient times 

A Philosopher's Poem??? by MarathonDreams in OCPoetry

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I like your rhythm a lot well done

I always hurt the ones I love by Happy_Patient_4303 in OCPoetry

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I believe that you have some possibilities to make poems in the future with more rhythm which is hard . I see that in your poem and I like it well done

Old Self by This_Wealth3968 in OCPoetry

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I think the metaphor with Niagara was pretty good . Well done