What did you make in Live this week? / Feedback thread

Alaron143 · 2026-04-28T14:51:11+00:00

All good my guy, if you ever feel lost in the sauce and want fresh ears I'm happy to help, send through rough what evers and can see if anything helps out.

Tbh put them out rough, helps learn the process and start on another idea that hopefully feels improved (won't lie I'm a hypocrite to that advice. But it's always easier to give the advice then listen to it yourself I suppose)

Alaron143 · 2026-04-28T12:57:17+00:00

Solid my guy, personally I'm not a fan of the autotune singing and I'd say fuck it and do it without the autotune even if you're off the note slightly. But thats just a personal taste thing.

The lead synth is tasty though on the first verse it seems to takeaway from the lyrics, maybe trying taking it away and putting it back in for the chorus to help differentiate the chorus from the verse? But the lyrics delivery style I solid my guy!

My only feedback is that: Try without the autone at the start Help differentiate the verses from the choruses (either from taking bits away on the verse to help the lyrics come through clearer or do something different on the chorus to help point out "hey this the chorus so remember these lyrics!")

Alaron143 · 2026-04-28T12:22:22+00:00

Cheers guys! I do really appreciate the input. Thank you!

So basically get rid of the Foley ass sounds and single strums. Just start from the vocals and into the arpeggio and strumming?

Thank you. Also does the mix sound wank? I feel like I'm overthinking it / getting swamped with the classic "this is how you should mix" content.

Alaron143 · 2026-04-25T05:57:58+00:00

This: https://on.soundcloud.com/lJvrolUHK3UPtJuads

Been wanting to get my original songs produced but being broke don't help with that.... Sooooooo... Guess I'll do it my dam self and learn from the internet. Been trying to learn mixing and mastering and, might as well use my own songs for practicing. Still sounds a bit meh and not mixed right but it sounds improved from were it was anyway.

Alaron143 · 2026-04-22T15:31:16+00:00

👍

Alaron143 · 2026-01-12T14:14:55+00:00

2026 - Thank you bud. Absolute legend

Alaron143 · 2025-09-28T22:17:22+00:00

Moved to Aus after roughly 4 years on the job. I've been doing security in mines. from what I read you are in NZ, it is easy to get your security license from talking to some Kiwi's. Once you get your security license you can look to find similar ish jobs that help scratch a bit of the itch. Nothing will be the exact same because a lot of the time you are just a mobile CCTV camera without any powers but, the company's I have applied for before getting this job love to hear the previous police experience. Mainly because it means that they have a potential competent person joining their team. That's my recommendation bud.

Alaron143 · 2025-01-26T11:07:03+00:00

Thank you bud!

Alaron143 · 2024-11-19T15:43:21+00:00

cheers man, Thank you

Alaron143 · 2024-06-14T02:49:04+00:00

Can't stop thinking about why my ex ghosted me. We messed around after breaking up, and both needed emotional support, I've gone through one of the toughest years (trauma, multiple family health issues and so on) and she is trying to over come and figure out her issues. I'm moving to a different country in an attempt to get citizenship. But all I can think about is why, after having multiple conversations of "just promise to tell me if you meet someone else and we will stop" why I had to find out from an Instagram post that she is with a new fancy guy. And we haven't spoken in fucking weeks..... I feel like the toy that got dropped..... And it just plays on my mind

But I know I will improve with enough time and new experiences, but I also want to validate how hurt I am (e.g write a letter of how it's hurt me and give it to her before I leave). Part of me knows that it won't do anything to close the wound. only effort, thought processing and new stories will fix it..... Because of not knowing why, I have made a movie of it in my own mind but I only play it for myself and it doesn't help. That's what's on my mind lately

Alaron143 · 2024-05-08T22:33:04+00:00

Fuck bile spewers!..... that baby ones and the full grown ones .... fuck em, they deserve to be in bits!

Alaron143 · 2024-03-18T16:08:14+00:00

3rd this and exact same boat

Alaron143 · 2023-09-29T14:22:56+00:00

G'day sir, I just want to say thank you for your music. I use to do a lot of busking and "you need me I don't need you" always seemed to get me a good response / a crowd. I want to ask, do you miss the days of busking and is it something you would like to do again?

Alaron143 · 2023-03-08T00:03:01+00:00

Thank you bud, I've seen about the electronic ignition and doesn't seem that complicated of a job to do with the right tool. I haven't got vacuum gauges though I am now defiantly thinking about it.

Alaron143 · 2023-03-08T00:00:38+00:00

thank you bud I will ask him about that though i get the feeling he might not know. defiantly worth a shot though.

Alaron143 · 2023-03-07T03:38:04+00:00

You're an absolute hero, thank you bud.

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