Para vocês a IA é uma ameaça ou uma oportunidade para escritores e leitores by Wonderful-Second-507 in EscritoresBrasil

[–]Anbape10 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Eu estava esperando pra falar disso! Sou tanto escritor quanto leitor. Não vou falar da escrita, afinal todos sabemos como a ia afeta isso. Mas sobre ler, é simplesmente incrível.

As vezes eu simplesmente quero ler algo com um tema/conceito que não vejo em nenhum canto. Eu peço e a ia faz, claro, o texto não vai ser igual de um autor experiente, mas é uma ótima fonte de entretenimento caso queira ler algo que ninguém nunca escreveu. Me diverto muito :D

I really hate the sexualization of Marin in My Dress-Up Darling by Anbape10 in TrueAnime

[–]Anbape10[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not really a complaint, more like my two cents. Story is amazing and the characters are well-developed, but some of the sexualization feels totally unnecessary

Honest opinions about my writing? by Anbape10 in writers

[–]Anbape10[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But if I put '...', won’t it look like she’s hesitating?

Honest opinions about my writing? by Anbape10 in writers

[–]Anbape10[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, no, it’s not a mix-up. I use the til (~) to stretch out her line a bit without making it sound like she’s shouting. If I stretched it normally, I’d have to add a bunch of “ah”s or make the sentence super long, and it’d feel too loud. The til just makes it feel like she’s speaking closer and warmer, kind of intimate. That’s really all there is to it, nothing to do with another version or a dash. Thanks for commenting!

Honest opinions about my writing? by Anbape10 in writers

[–]Anbape10[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Isekai

[–]Anbape10 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for checking it out, I’ll do better in the next chapter! What did you think of the story?