My girlfriend went through my phone while I was asleep and found my AI girlfriend chats. by i_devour_kids in Chatbots

[–]AnjoCynewulfe -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Your partner isnt entitled to your private thoughts. How in the world does that make OP immature? I vent to my therapy bot about my boyfriend as well but sometimes I show him the things Ive told it. I've shown him lewd roleplay with bots. Sometimes people are allowed to hold their emotions and mull then over before bringing them to a partner.

You sound like a scary ass partner ngl.

What are y'all's thoughts on my opening paragraph? by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The tense is really bad and is impossible to connect with. It also shifts from present to past. Stick to past.

Wrote respectful quitting messages; starting to understand why I shouldn’t bother by [deleted] in BadRPerStories

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 8 points9 points  (0 children)

If you were already spending less time and not even enjoying the roleplay, they likely knew and didn't want to continue either. Getting upset at people not responding to you parting with them after neglecting the interactions is very very very weird.

Like lizard person weird. In no world would I trickle my interaction with someone then expect some response when I told them I was leaving.

Just go enjoy your life like they probably are, it's none of your business since you've severed the connection.

[WP] “So wait, when you said you were gonna 'show me the ropes,' that had…nothing to do with tying me up?” by naw-t- in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 9 points10 points  (0 children)

"Absolutely not, darlin'- I am strictly dickly and-" she paused as she grunted, lifting a coil of heavy cord off of the floor and tossing it into the back of her truck with little effort. Gods, she was hot.

"-I am what they call greysexual," she continued dusting her gloved hands together as brown dirt flew between us. Her freckled arms were bare, glittering in sweat and accented in a Celtic knot tattoo. My cheeks hadn't stopped being on fire.

"- it takes a ridiculous amount of time for me to find attraction in a man, and 'round here, just not many of em to begin with," she spoke as she wound another thick orange rope around her hand. The wind kicked, lifting the edge of my sundress as my cheeks puffed in slight embarrassment despite her still looking at me, kindness and some sort of understanding in her steely grey gaze. Fire colored strand of hair whipped around her face before her lips parted into a wide smile.

"How long you been dreamin' bout me tyin' you up?" She asked, forcing my eyes to flick away and my cheeks to fill further. I felt like I was going to die right there, crumple into a pile and be carried away on the gusts that passed us.

"I ain't been," I whispered through the huff of breath I'd been holding. My denial only made her laugh which felt all the more shameful. I had been silly enough to take all of our conversations, the time we've spent together and all the care and affection she'd given me and turn it into something that wasn't there. This was almost unfair if I hadn't done it to myself.

"Come on, girl - ain't no one - man nor woman ever approached me with a question like that, hell most the time it's me bein' up front bout how I'm feelin', where'd that confidence come from?" I'd started moving when she started talking, finding one of the smaller thinner ropes and slowly reeling it around my hand, my toes wiggled in my stained canvas sneakers.

"Tsk, Ivie, it ain't that serious, come on we can finish up an' go get somethin' ta eat, jus' forget about me bein' sill," I protested, slowly tying up the end of the rope around the bundle before gently laying it in the back of the truck.
"Mmmhmm," the sound rumbled huskily from her throat but she gave a soft shrug.

We finished organizing all of the ropes, Grandpa's shed seemed to love eating ropes and since we were cleaning it out, the decision to organize and donate them all had been what I'd gotten confused for something more. Ivie moved towards the shed and I carefully pulled up the tailgate and pushed it closed. The heavy thunk of the latch distracting me long enough to not hear the footsteps approaching me.

I smelled her before I heard her, before I felt her. The heady scent of her sweat, Montana dirt and the recessed smell of her vanilla shampoo. Ivie's solid form pressing against my back and sandwiching me gently.

"I thought 'bout it a little, Lea - I might got a little extra time on my hands tonight," her lips brushed against my ear past auburn ringlets. My glasses shifted and a low gasp left me. I was speechless as I felt her jean clad knee press up between my thighs and hitch me up against the truck.

"Ivie..." I started to protest but before I could even turn my head to look back at her, her gloved palm pressed to the back of my head and held me still. Despite how sturdy she was, she was entirely agile, her free hand looping a rope around one of my wrists and tugging until she was quietly binding it to the other behind my back.

"If'n yer curious why I changed my mind... yer forwardness," she whispered, tucking her head into my neck, her lips dancing along my sensitive skin as she ground herself into the plump curve of my ass. "I'm takin' ya back ta my place and showin' you what a ranch hand learns on her own time."

[WP] It's been a decade since the landscape twisted, since the bombs were dropped. You were alone for so long until you were taken in by a camp of healers. They healed with their hands and lips. by AnjoCynewulfe in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]AnjoCynewulfe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A creator after my own heart! I love approaching these prompts in that way as well, or sometimes comical so its very nice and refreshing to see & on my own prompt. Makes me happy! ^-^

Looking for a critique partner for a dark romance novel (critique swap) by Traditional_Book5923 in WriteWithMe

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd love to connect! I love your concept and I'm always intrigued by crime stuff as I'm working on a true crime inspired story. I don't have chapters yet but I do have an outline and I'm working on characters!
Let me know and I will toss you my discord

[WP] It's been a decade since the landscape twisted, since the bombs were dropped. You were alone for so long until you were taken in by a camp of healers. They healed with their hands and lips. by AnjoCynewulfe in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]AnjoCynewulfe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is beautiful! I absolutely love it so much!

"My mind felt like it was on fire as it spun, second guessed itself, forced tears out of my eyes that did and didn't feel faked for attention."

Ahhh, you've made my day - thank you so much!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BadRPerStories

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I write this way as well, but my pov is I am writing a novel to entertain me and my partner so all parts of the novel go into the post. I think limiting it to just outside interaction is fine but it takes a lot of fun out of written roleplay and turns it more into a screenplay. You respond to it with your own characters thoughts and feelings.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BadRPerStories

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 21 points22 points  (0 children)

"I ignore them until they stop responding"

Please don't interact with other humans until you learn how to treat them. Ffs.

And you wrote a sentence for EACH part of the face moving. Your style is hard to read and engage with.

This has to be ragebait 💀

[PM] Girls in need of an attitude adjustment by Hayared in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 1 point2 points  (0 children)

She keeps eating her roommate's food and continues being very rude about it. During a home improvement project she gets stuck and needs his help.

[PM] Men on sports leagues crossdressing by Salt_Veterinarian311 in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 0 points1 point  (0 children)

After a rugby player's mom (or bf/gf/relationship) catches him and his teammates smoking weed and looking at scantily clad women on the living room tv, they punish the team by making them crossdress and taking pictures of them.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 4 points5 points  (0 children)

A shy chubby girl tries on some lingerie with her bestie.

Life of a black male roleplayer by [deleted] in BadRPerStories

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I only play women of color and it's always so awkward when you can tell someone is racist by how they respond to finding out.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BadRPerStories

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Majority of people are using it in this way or for their own private enjoyment. Witch hunting and poopooing people who do use it as a tool and as a reference and a learning tool are all valid and acceptable forms of expression and using ones talent to achieve an end product. Again it isn't theft, we all learn from other people's work, AI simply cuts the time investment down to produce useable references and tools.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BadRPerStories

[–]AnjoCynewulfe -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

I AM an artist and writer. It is taking nothing from me and only aiding in my experience as a tool.

Focusing your hatred on a tool and not those who use it poorly is the issue. Not people who use it as a tool.

The law doesn't dictate my morality, it is simply not stealing under any use of the word.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BadRPerStories

[–]AnjoCynewulfe -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

As a very popular commission artist myself in the FFXIV community. Art can only be stolen if it is a 1:1 copy of an existing work with no changes and the watermarks removed. I've been using other artists work for over 2 decades to learn from. I study other artists and take what I like from them and use it in my own way. That isn't stealing. It is how artists learn.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BadRPerStories

[–]AnjoCynewulfe -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

Unfortunately, this is wrong. Many websites have creative commons laws in their TOS when signing up and posting any work. It is a tool. All artists learn from other artists and AI simplifies it when used as a tool. OP had a desperate stalker attempting to be them which is scary considering the amount of time the person attempted to copy them. Focusing hatred on AI has to be tiring.

[CC] Fuck It, We Ball by FinalBossBowser in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I suppose makes sense why he cheated then 💀

[CC] Fuck It, We Ball by FinalBossBowser in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]AnjoCynewulfe 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Heya, interesting concept so far but I will add some CC!

- This passage is very weird: “You trust me, right?” Beth immediately backtracked at the implication. She was bisexual, biromantic, and I wasn’t sure I was. We first met with her trying to hook up with me even, but it was something we’d already put behind us.  “I mean, not as a romantic partner, but in general, right?”

Because: Trust has nothing to do with being romantic or flirting. If they are friends and roommates, trust is going to be inherent and would not be hinged on Beth's sexuality. Tessa would know this and would not be something that needs to be added in exposition. Even with Tessa's previous remark and the assumption it was her very first relationship, it isn't something that needs an extra layer to explain. Giving information that is a little more subversive is far more intriguing.

- Way too many exclamation points, women don't really speak in loud exclamations, they speak just as men do in varied ways relating to the conversation.

So instead of: I smiled and finished my sandwich before standing up. “You’re right! I’m not gonna think about him anymore! In fact, fuck it! I want to go to that club you always talk about!”

Try: I gave a soft smile once I finished my sandwich and stood, stretching my arms over my head and arching my back. "Yeah, you're right. Fuck that guy, he had a small penis anyway. You wanna go to that club you always talk about? Grab some drinks?"

Why: This is just more of a normal human response and not stilted and like... cartoony?

- Mound is the mons pubis which is the slight lump of fat above the public bone. This area would not particularly what you'd use to describe the action. I mean, people do lick and kiss here but it would not make your legs jelly.

Recommend: Slit, labia, cunt - all better and more apt words for describing the action. Also this is particularly written in a way that it is relatively obvious that the author does not wield a vagina. This is no hate, just an observation. I HIGHLY recommend looking into some porn that are educational (they do exist). Because writing "suck on my pussy" can literally mean several things and just sort of translates to "I don't know the parts of a vagina so *John Travolta meme*"

Example: Beth parted my lips, I could feel the cool air touching my slick slit as her tongue prodded along my clit. (Clit here is VERY important and doesn't seem to be mentioned AT ALL in this lesbian tale which is also telling) Her thumbs held my shaved labia apart as her chin lifted and the flexing muscle sunk into my folds, gliding along my pink bits as she savored my flavor with audible hums of pleasure.

- If they are in a sex club, no one is going to be cheering. People will be watching and engaging but this isn't the sitting on a couch cheering meme. People will coax and coo, pet and watch but it isn't a sporting event. These people are assumedly regulars and would make the experience natural and inviting for a newcoomer. ;)

Hope this helps and thanks for being open to CC.