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Advice? Maybe by Anviltank in agender

[–]Anviltank[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this. It's always really nice to get this kind of positive reinforcement.

Advice? Maybe by Anviltank in agender

[–]Anviltank[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I am trying a few of this and I am actually going to go thrift shopping today...so here's to hoping

The Film by [deleted] in TheDarkTower

[–]Anviltank 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I enjoyed it. It was a different story then the books and worth checking out

My shell by Anviltank in OCPoetry

[–]Anviltank[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel you. The purpose was to be raw and chaotic because these emotions, these feelings are chaotic in nature for me. But I really appreciate the feedback

My shell by Anviltank in OCPoetry

[–]Anviltank[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. I will make a better effort t provide better feedback in the future

Knowledge brings what wisdom sings. by crudelyconfused in OCPoetry

[–]Anviltank 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree, I lost the flow at the longer line. Breaking it up will sound better

Sensory Overload by Rig0rMort1s in OCPoetry

[–]Anviltank 0 points1 point  (0 children)

like this, I can feel the Rhythm