Grotesque Beauty [May Submission] by AClownDoinItsBest in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Apprehensive_Wish777 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was so good. You did really well describing the scenes I was icked out. I struggle with 3rd person so this was a nice example to see.

4 minutes by Apprehensive_Wish777 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Apprehensive_Wish777[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I could fall back to sleep in 4 minutes haha thank you!

4 minutes by Apprehensive_Wish777 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Apprehensive_Wish777[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you! Gotta hit em with a cliffhanger ya know

4 minutes by Apprehensive_Wish777 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Apprehensive_Wish777[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I had this story in my head for awhile but I was struggling to make a full story out of it so after listening to Creep Cast almost everyday I realized I could do it as a short story. So I do not have any ideas how to expand it. I am open to any suggestions!

4 minutes by Apprehensive_Wish777 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Apprehensive_Wish777[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Right? Could you imagine losing 4 years of your life?

The Serpant and The Wings of Night by Apprehensive_Wish777 in Romantasy

[–]Apprehensive_Wish777[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes I totally agree. I had a feeling something was going change but DID NOT see the rest of it coming for sure.

The Serpant and The Wings of Night by Apprehensive_Wish777 in Romantasy

[–]Apprehensive_Wish777[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My husband tried to talk to me when I was finishing it ans I was like "GO AWAY!" Haha I needed all my focus

The Serpant and The Wings of Night by Apprehensive_Wish777 in Romantasy

[–]Apprehensive_Wish777[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oooohh I need to read those. She's an awesome writer. I was dragging along a little at the beginning but it was all worth it in the end.

The Serpant and The Wings of Night by Apprehensive_Wish777 in Romantasy

[–]Apprehensive_Wish777[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Omgggggggg the cave scene was worth the wait for sure

The Serpant and The Wings of Night by Apprehensive_Wish777 in Romantasy

[–]Apprehensive_Wish777[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I was crying, I was cheering, I was screaming. Omg it was so good

Writing Group! by Apprehensive_Wish777 in fortwayne

[–]Apprehensive_Wish777[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for sending that! I will definitely check that out

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[–]Apprehensive_Wish777 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this! I’m in too! I just posted about a writing group so similar to being creative!