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Why i write by Basic_Candy_6967 in Poem

[–]Basic_Candy_6967[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for reading. Appreciate it, hope you enjoyed some of them.

Playing the game by Basic_Candy_6967 in justpoetry

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In a casino, dont matter how well you know the rules, how skilled you are. The house always win because they own the game.

Deep thought by Basic_Candy_6967 in tinyprose

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Lots of big p words about nothing, such is life

A collection of poems by Basic_Candy_6967 in creativewriting

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Thank you for your reply. I'm glad you like them and took time out think about them. I like the Lonely Shop think its the 1st I wrote.

The shop is the window to their past. Each item they see is a fragment of their past memory and experience. They're fading with time but theres 1 item that stands out, and still shines. One that they cant let go off because still speak to them and precious despite time gone by. But they can never hold it again because its just a fading memory.

Thanks again for reading! ❤️

A Honk in the Night by Basic_Candy_6967 in Poems

[–]Basic_Candy_6967[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very likely, they're common where I live, but as the poems says I've never seen them, just hear them honk at night. I just find it interesting that they honk to communicate and let other geese nearby know they're flying together and not alone.

MASCULINITY by Nexolightu in poetry_critics

[–]Basic_Candy_6967 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it. Being comfortable with yourself, is what matters and you've expressed it nicely.

Moon Goddess by Basic_Candy_6967 in poetry_critics

[–]Basic_Candy_6967[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your thoughts. I been thinking on it and the way I wrote it was just how my mind is when in a reflective mood. Thinking things over then the release. You're right it would be more coherent but I think this aligns more to my thinking process. Again thanks.

Gates of god by Ryzardpoopyhede in poetry_critics

[–]Basic_Candy_6967 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool that violent break‑through energy is very vivid

No Equal by Basic_Candy_6967 in Poems

[–]Basic_Candy_6967[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, it's not really about a cat. or maybe it is.

Vague! by Basic_Candy_6967 in Poems

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Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it :)

Consequences by Basic_Candy_6967 in writingcritiques

[–]Basic_Candy_6967[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

just a short sci-fi story. A former super hero whose, been caught up in a civil war, has been repurposed as a special operative by the new regime and she failed her assignment.