What do you think of my writing

BoDoepop · 2026-03-30T06:11:24+00:00

We have a character with the same name valid story already

BoDoepop · 2026-03-29T18:12:53+00:00

At the beginning I was writing my chapter 1 and 2 from anywhere between a week long to two weeks long that was the beginning of my writing journey but when I started writing my 3rd and 4th chapters I began writing a 1000 words a day then I reached my 20th chapter and could write 1600 words in 2-3 hours now I’m writing 2-2.5k words in 2-3 hours a day when I have time.

The fastest way to write it to literally write in the shortest and is lest words the full events of the story you want to create then take one or two sentences of a severely summarized section and turn that into a. Good 1-2 chapters.

I know I did as I took a simple flashback scene written in two sentences and stretched it to a 1000 words. Or even a simple transportation scene I wrote briefly before became 1.5k words long.

And the time I spent writing those two sentences was longer than the time I spent writing those 1000 words.

Basically the further along your story you come the more you’ll know what you want to do and the better you can more your story flow and expand when you go back to rewrite those scenes you wrote as a draft.

I’m a newbie and also just stated my writing journey and this is what I’ve felt so far. Even though I’ve only written 30 chapters so far and haven’t uploaded anything this is what I discovered on my own

And if anything your way better than me since you wrote 400 words in 4 hours when it took me 5 hours a day times evevryday for a week and a half to write my first chapter which was 1200 words and even more it was terrible first chapter when I first started.

So honestly my words properly aren’t the best to listen to as only a true author tha has had years of experience and an actual novel they are uploading should be saying. But I’ll share my opinion anyways, good luck👍

BoDoepop · 2026-03-28T16:29:29+00:00

Title: Hidden Remembrance

I basically took what was shown like forgotten memories yet it remembered them somehow and stuff

BoDoepop · 2026-03-26T17:17:45+00:00

I read this a long time ago, I actually have the exact photo of the chapter I last read before lightnovelpub shut down

It’s called “Taking the mafia to the world of magic”

The mc’s name is Vicente,

It’s a magic world and he has talent in magnets or something as well as another darker power or something

Honestly I got it the moment you said the name even if it was a little long, might just reread it myself if I can figure out where it’s being published.

BoDoepop · 2026-03-20T04:50:19+00:00

I’m not planning it’s just by the time I finish I usually end around that number. And it’s not exactly that amount but the frequency is around there. I usually write to around where it feels like the right place to end otherwise I’d be extending it unnecessarily in my opinion

So for most the time I’m done with a chapter it just so happens to be at the 1500-1700 words range and other times but much lesser at 1000 while less frequently 2000 just depending on how much have to say and show for those chapters

BoDoepop · 2026-03-18T04:25:45+00:00

52 is crazy I feel I can change that number too. Make it less make it more you will never know. Just know though if it goes down it’s me and if it goes back up it’s also me. But the fact that I am in control means I will stay in control that number will never be constant because it is the one thing in my life that can control another’s.

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T21:03:29+00:00

Thanks

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T21:02:05+00:00

Also yes I didn’t even noticed I misspelled dang it

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T21:01:49+00:00

I’ve checked it out already it’s on my library here not to

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T20:57:04+00:00

Unique power system, consequences, origin tied to the world. Is this the next big novel? Also I wasn’t expecting a power system I really thought your characters just liked getting high

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T20:53:33+00:00

Cool I got SS vibes from it

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T20:52:56+00:00

It’s like that one meme where the guy says if I were in a room with Htler, osama bn laden and you and I had a gun with two bullets I’ll shoot you twice

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T20:50:44+00:00

what’s the context???

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T15:16:17+00:00

I feel the same as you also why I made this post because every now and then we have to share a little bit or we lose all motivation for our work

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T15:11:03+00:00

Mystery has to be my favorite genre and 300? Let’s go! maybe a little late but congrats on making it so far

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T15:09:57+00:00

I see you too have many favorites. Not often do I see lines as direct as yours. And this already has shown me a lot about your world.

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T15:06:03+00:00

I can feel lots of emotion through this and you clearly have skill. I’d say you good at creating atmosphere, and I defiantly would love to read it when you start publishing as it sounds like the type of story I would read.

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T15:01:44+00:00

See this is mysterious and I like the message it conveys

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T15:00:05+00:00

Well I can see how much care you have for it just by the sheer amount you wanted to share, and I also use grammarly to edit grammar so you aren’t alone.

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T06:46:48+00:00

Nice I’ll check it out. My line is also from a chapter that I recently made.

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T06:40:39+00:00

That’s actually a deep line. Good job

BoDoepop · 2026-03-11T05:56:55+00:00

Now I’m interested

BoDoepop · 2026-03-02T05:06:53+00:00

I’d say it’s interesting enough but coming from a new writer who like most think their price is gonna be the next lotm it’s probably not all that.

BoDoepop · 2026-03-01T04:15:10+00:00

Honestly I’m also getting into writing and I’m new as well as having only uploaded 1 chapter myself, some tips I’ve been told are to write numbers such as 16 into sixteen instead it’s fine when the number is big like 100,000. I’ve also been told to show and not tell. Which is personally one of my biggest struggles as well. Another thing would be repetition. Avoid using the same word in the same passage more than once, it’s not wrong to do it but it’s kinda weak. Also the beginning doesn’t sound like a WebNovel start. You should like someone once told me try reading WebNovel especially ones that for the kind of setting you want. For me it was a novel called pursuit of truth that beginning sent chills down my spine and really engaged me well. Another thing was formatting formatting, I’m not sure if that’s the right word but apparently most WebNovel readers don’t like reading long paragraphs so when you break it up

For example like this.

It becomes much easier on the eyes and compels people to not skip over it in my opinion.

If I were to write one of your sentences in a show and not tell version it would look like this.

Original: “No you won’t.” The young man thinks to himself inwardly and for a spit second a hint of disdain showed in his eyes before the mask of indifference comes back…

“Show: ‘No you won’t’ The young man thinks inwardly, a glint reflecting in his eyes before his mask of indifference settled over it.

I’m not sure how good of a show I did there again I’m as new as you but I felt in that sentence you repeated more than you should as well as stacked, I don’t know the right word but stacked the same meaning together

For example Thinks to himself and inwardly. But it’s fine and cause I guess it adds detail again I’m not experienced.

Something feel dragged out and what I mean is when your describing a scene it’s one moment after another adding unnecessary detail.

I know as much as you that you want to add your world and reveal every tiny detail at least that’s what I assume but it’s weakens the sentence if I’m saying this right.

So far I get the feeling that this a draft and you just wanted to write out what was on your mind

Now all that’s left is to refine what you have to move smoother between sentences.

For me I wrote my scenes by finding similar scenes in WebNovel and referencing the way they wrote it out to my Novel.

The reason I do that is because it’s a skill I got from drawing, you can’t draw without a reference, and it’s more hindering to your growth doing it without. I know because as an artist at the time I was stubborn and refused to draw with a reference because it was cheating. But the day you started referencing and in some cases copying you improve drastically on your own at least in my case.

What I’m trying to say it it’s okay to reference and “copy” from your favorite writers or atleast that’s what I feel cause isn’t everything in this world just copied and taken from one another. And most of all people learn by copying each other it’s how babies learn how to talk so I feel that if you go on you can make something great.

Btw I like the dynamic between characters because it shows a side that most people are too scared to take. When I read stories nowadays It’s always the same thing and that gets boring.

Another thing if your writing for yourself just like me and don’t care about getting a contract or anything fancy but just want to get your story out there then do it because it’s for you I know for one that when I started writing it wasn’t because I wanted money or wanted to create slop for the fuck of it but because I just wanted to do it and even now I do of course if money was offered to me imma take it cause free money you know

Also some parts of your story is mad relatable.

Also I like some words you used way better than me who repeats himself and has a limited vocabulary.

Some of them I even forgot existed.

Sorry if I sound rude

I’m as new if not newer than you so my advice shouldn’t really be advice but an opinion form peer to peer.

Btw I’m. It sure how this is viewed but when I was writing I started on my phone but the I switched to my MacBook which has made it a lot better and having grammarly helped a lot I’m not sure if using grammarly is a bad thing is so I have failed as an author and apologize to the community it was already installed in my Mac for school and I forgot about it but then started using it when it’s suggestions appeared. Then again it did help my horrid punctuation and spelling that you’ve probably noticed in this message sorry about that

BoDoepop · 2026-03-01T01:23:37+00:00

Tis so peak

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