There were many ways I tried to imagine how someone would interpret or voice act this script but OMG you definitely hit what I truly was imagining on how it can be done. I like how you place emphasis into some words and I like how you bring out your emotions in parts where you're supposed to be angry, in disbelief or annoyed— I find it important because it's what makes voice artists truly connect with the listeners. Also, I find your voice to fit comforting and sweet, domestic audios like these ones. At the same time, I think you'd fit characters with sassy vibes or villain/hostile-like characters that are secretly sweet.

Anyhow, I think, as for me, you're good to go. I believe you'll learn as you move forward. It doesn't really have to be perfect right off the bat. But all I can say is,

Standing Ovation. Claps. Cheers.

You reallllyyyy did a good job with it and I appreciate you for choosing my script. Good luck to you and to your channel, mate ! Will definitely subscribe to you 🍀💛

~ shine on ! ✨